Cyber Steampunk

Cyber Steampunk

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Author: Ying44227
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August, a swordsmith from 1861, gets transported to 2034 and meets his 5x great-grandson, Kyle. But strange things start to happen around him and to him. Will they ever find out what's happening?

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I_Y_I
I_Y_I

yh I think you should work on your description and writing skill, I find it very hard to understand what's going on

2 years ago
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hayden_widjaja
hayden_widjaja

Umm, I feel like you need to make the characters have some issues and describe stuff and explain stuff, the world background is good but the design like descriptions aren't really great, a tip is to try to describe important characters, if not important, try at least give some descriptions of minor characters like: A man with a suit appeared. Like it give minimal description to give the reader a bit of way to undersand, I hope you will improve with me as well, do not give up :)))

4 years ago
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