Don't read this novel you will be disapponted becuase it is full of inaccuracy and inconsistency
WRITTING QUALITY
There are some mistake that completely makes the whole sentence wrong. There are grammatical error here and there
STABILITY OF UPDATING
Kinda stable
STORY DEVELOPMENT
The story develop in a weird way that makes no sense
CHARACTER DESIGN
It is a piece of thr*sh!! Most of the characters are beyond stupid. Like abel, getting a blush after he was complimented by his father but before that he was called a windhead ( i presume as airhead ).
WORLD BACKGROUND
Complete garbage. It is clearly that they in the "SUPERNATURAL" world. So author must follow the laws of that said world.
In it, GOD is the origin of magic. Why you ask? Because when rowena ask amara to transport them back in time since GOD is dying (if he can really die) because she cannot live in a world without magic. But amara refuses thats why rowena double crosses amara.
Also, GOD ask the help of the arkangels because he cannot seal his sister (amara) without injuring her.
Also who created the MC, he just appeared out of nowhere then got new memories that comes with a new name and a mission. It means he didn't transmigrate with whole body but just his soul or memory.
Thats for the supernatural part
Mystic eyes of death perception
This eyes have limitation. In the anime where this eye originated from, they cannot kill a being just because night time came, then how can the MC uses this to kill GOD if he doesn't have an actual death.
Also this eyes cannot see through objects like byagugan of naruto world.
For the rest this is my complaint
First
how did the mc acquire the DIAMOND mirror if he doesn't know where to find diamonds.
Second
Where did he acquire the fryingpan he used to cook if he doesn't know how to mine the metal, refined it then forged it to make the frying pan. Remember he is the only sentient being this time period.
Third
How can GOD go to heaven then fight amara in heaven and then the mc saw GOD capturing amara in heaven and then saw GOD retreat to heaven after the fight. Like you are already at home then you went back at home from your home
Fourth
If something is hidden from your sight it means it is in the same plane of your existence. But heaven is not in the sky or hell is not below ground in "supernatural" they are more on a different dimension.
Fifth
How did lucifers knows he cannot grow his hands if it is his first time losing it and experiencing mystic eyes of death perception.
5 years ago
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JaimeMedeiros
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5 years ago
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Trey_Phillips
Keep up the good work!!!
Can't wait for the Romance with the MC and Amara
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5 years ago
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iiloveme
Love it 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
especially how you described the mc he is so handsome 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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5 years ago
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Horny_Dawg
Loved it! keep up the good work
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Ediimon
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5 years ago
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Clwxui
So far it's very good, waiting for new chapters.
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Primordial_Phoenix
LOVE IT
Amara and Oc
The Eternal Husband and Wife
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5 years ago
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Zolegio
Quite amazing so far, cant wait to see how it turns out later :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
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Don't read this novel you will be disapponted becuase it is full of inaccuracy and inconsistency WRITTING QUALITY There are some mistake that completely makes the whole sentence wrong. There are grammatical error here and there STABILITY OF UPDATING Kinda stable STORY DEVELOPMENT The story develop in a weird way that makes no sense CHARACTER DESIGN It is a piece of thr*sh!! Most of the characters are beyond stupid. Like abel, getting a blush after he was complimented by his father but before that he was called a windhead ( i presume as airhead ). WORLD BACKGROUND Complete garbage. It is clearly that they in the "SUPERNATURAL" world. So author must follow the laws of that said world. In it, GOD is the origin of magic. Why you ask? Because when rowena ask amara to transport them back in time since GOD is dying (if he can really die) because she cannot live in a world without magic. But amara refuses thats why rowena double crosses amara. Also, GOD ask the help of the arkangels because he cannot seal his sister (amara) without injuring her. Also who created the MC, he just appeared out of nowhere then got new memories that comes with a new name and a mission. It means he didn't transmigrate with whole body but just his soul or memory. Thats for the supernatural part Mystic eyes of death perception This eyes have limitation. In the anime where this eye originated from, they cannot kill a being just because night time came, then how can the MC uses this to kill GOD if he doesn't have an actual death. Also this eyes cannot see through objects like byagugan of naruto world. For the rest this is my complaint First how did the mc acquire the DIAMOND mirror if he doesn't know where to find diamonds. Second Where did he acquire the fryingpan he used to cook if he doesn't know how to mine the metal, refined it then forged it to make the frying pan. Remember he is the only sentient being this time period. Third How can GOD go to heaven then fight amara in heaven and then the mc saw GOD capturing amara in heaven and then saw GOD retreat to heaven after the fight. Like you are already at home then you went back at home from your home Fourth If something is hidden from your sight it means it is in the same plane of your existence. But heaven is not in the sky or hell is not below ground in "supernatural" they are more on a different dimension. Fifth How did lucifers knows he cannot grow his hands if it is his first time losing it and experiencing mystic eyes of death perception.
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Keep up the good work!!! Can't wait for the Romance with the MC and Amara ___________________________________________________________________________________________
Love it 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 especially how you described the mc he is so handsome 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Thanks author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 Please update ✌️✌✌✌😁😁😁😁
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So far it's very good, waiting for new chapters.
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Quite amazing so far, cant wait to see how it turns out later :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
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