Haytam, a normal teenager from a normal family from earth had a car crash. After the car crash, Haytam died and transmigrate to a cultivation world,
with the most perfect system that existed ever.
Haytam will travel over this new world and enjoy his life to the maximum, to find new friends and the love he always wanted.
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Hello everyone, I am the author of this novel. This is the first time I write a novel and I hope you understand what it means, if I do a mistake or think something could be better, than write it to me, I will try my best to improve it. Enjoy my novel and thank you for reading.
I gave it 5 stars because it is so bad. It is so bad to the extinct that i can't live without the daily realease. It is so bad that i can't even stop rereading it.
worst novel that ever existed here, humans are equal to robots and within 2 days he says he "loves" his parents and says he will protect them until the end, a person from the land who is 20 years old within 2 days said he loves 2 strangers and calls them father and mother ... example: you reincarnate in another world and this happens, you take the body of a family and everything, gain your memories not feelings "MENMORIAS" NOT FEELINGS, and you are healthy conscience within days, not hours says you love two strangers ... just say don't read this.
Pretty nice for a first novel, rating should be a 1, but giving it a 3 just because of the dedication. That being said, its kinda sad how you show no improvement from start to end(most recent chapter).
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Dear lord let me out.
It's like the author is 10 and has never got a Christmas present so he processed his sad live with this story where he gets everything for free. The characters are bad the story has 2 sides good and bad but nothing between. The Mc is like a child himself and I can say for sure that when I was 20 I was not like him. The dialogs needs improvement. I can understand that the author wants to create something that we haven't read a 100 times but to say hey I want it here you have it for free is not the best way in my opinion. After a month he is the strongest person on the continent, well I can life with that but than improve the background story and the plot
Bad spelling, cringy and the system does everything the mc asks without restrictions or requirements. MC is like a kid...........,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,...........................,..................
Worst of time,too cringey,the worst mc I have ever seen in my life👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
wrost character personality and the story shit such a waste of time. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ..🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
It's good.
Really great job, keep up, and hope you can write more chapters, good luck and many thanks for your hard working, hope you canna continue writing on this novels and realise many other chapters, bye.
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Pls update soonT-T!! Cant wait to read next chapter... .................................................................................................