The story is very interesting to an extent that it draws attention.. but one thing is that some words are spelt incorrectly, hope that will be worked on. The language used isn't that bad ... But the translation should sound more accurate and not in an exeggerative way. And one other thing is that , we are supposed to be updated on what's going on with Camilla's mother in the hospital. I feel that part is important in the story too
5 years ago
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Malain_Makasasala
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4 years ago
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Fatima_TheBest
Very nice story i bet you cant finish it all in one day ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ if you read it! Lmfao
5 years ago
1
Bxbyyy_bri
I really love this story it's sexy and sad but good fantastic also I hope there an other chapter and it's better than the other one I really thought they were going to have sex but they didn't but it's okay probably in the next few chapter.
5 years ago
1
Igoh_Gideon
Its very interesting very romantic, enthusiastic, realistic and physicalised
I love tye stories ahead it was showing you the difference between Prado by
5 years ago
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Novelcat_Wind
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4 years ago
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DaoistE0ggwS
Hey, this is Michael, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book He and her virginity on webnovel, and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform.
We'll pay you an advance payment as well as royalty if you'd like to work with us.It's only because I really admire your talent and love your book that I made it through the websites to send you this message.
If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email: Michaelcringdam@gmail.com[img=update]
4 years ago
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Egnis_Snyders
I think the development of this story is so good but the fact that it turned our that she killed his mother was like a knife in his back. When will they get back together and tell each other that they both still love each other and is still yearning and longing. I really hope they find their way back together.
Am enjoying the story so far, the twist and turns are good, didn't expect Camila to be connected the mixer of his mother, I like the turn of events and the suspense too.
4 years ago
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mira_grey
Awn soo interesting wish i could read all.such a disappointment though.Buh there are alot of mistakes too.such a nice story..i can't waot for the next chapters.
4 years ago
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Keylee_Zandile
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4 years ago
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Goreth_Adelino
Hummm this story is really good n interesting it got some literatura problema but its just a minor rhing it should really show very quickly the next chapters
Thank you
4 years ago
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Umar_Tanvir
the story line is fast paced and arousing as it invites the reader to read more and more.It is food for thought.it is deeply alluring.although the character build of tucker is not good but it shows that he is less complicatedly built compared to other novels mcs.
Interesting keep it up๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐ ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐โค๐๐๐๐
The story is very interesting to an extent that it draws attention.. but one thing is that some words are spelt incorrectly, hope that will be worked on. The language used isn't that bad ... But the translation should sound more accurate and not in an exeggerative way. And one other thing is that , we are supposed to be updated on what's going on with Camilla's mother in the hospital. I feel that part is important in the story too
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Very nice story i bet you cant finish it all in one day ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ if you read it! Lmfao
I really love this story it's sexy and sad but good fantastic also I hope there an other chapter and it's better than the other one I really thought they were going to have sex but they didn't but it's okay probably in the next few chapter.
Its very interesting very romantic, enthusiastic, realistic and physicalised I love tye stories ahead it was showing you the difference between Prado by
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Hey, this is Michael, an editor from Stary.ltd. I just read your book He and her virginity on webnovel, and I'd like to know if you are interested in releasing or distributing your books on our platform. We'll pay you an advance payment as well as royalty if you'd like to work with us.It's only because I really admire your talent and love your book that I made it through the websites to send you this message. If you are interested ,do let me know and feel free to ask me anytime you like if you have any questions via this email: Michaelcringdam@gmail.com[img=update]
I think the development of this story is so good but the fact that it turned our that she killed his mother was like a knife in his back. When will they get back together and tell each other that they both still love each other and is still yearning and longing. I really hope they find their way back together.
Cant stop myself reading๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Am enjoying the story so far, the twist and turns are good, didn't expect Camila to be connected the mixer of his mother, I like the turn of events and the suspense too.
Awn soo interesting wish i could read all.such a disappointment though.Buh there are alot of mistakes too.such a nice story..i can't waot for the next chapters.
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Hummm this story is really good n interesting it got some literatura problema but its just a minor rhing it should really show very quickly the next chapters Thank you
the story line is fast paced and arousing as it invites the reader to read more and more.It is food for thought.it is deeply alluring.although the character build of tucker is not good but it shows that he is less complicatedly built compared to other novels mcs.