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Author: daphneanmarcia
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Dazzle is a young teen girl with a beautiful face and a kind heart. She is such a angel and a loyal friend but not the peoples around her.



Bullied by school mates, Harassed by her teachers, seeing all her friend being abused...Even after seeing all this, she couldn't do anything.



Why? Because the city where she lived gives respect and rights only to men.



If a woman talks backs or rebels, it is her end. End of her life and dignity.



But not anymore. She has the power of karma by her side.



Going through continuous assaults and facing deaths of her loved ones, made her a heartless bitch.



"WOMAN'S AREN'T SUPPOSED TO UPSET A MEN? THEN WHY NOT KILL THEM INSTEAD?" Dazzle thought



Read more to find Dazzle's journey from a weak angel to a deadly demoness.





Will she be a psychopath who devours blood or just revenge?

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Brintha_Pauldurai
Brintha_Pauldurai

Me, as a new reader loved it. I love these mysterious stories. Most of the gangster stories are based on male leads but I loved how you chose female and KIDS... I could relate this story because it is about a **** girl. I noticed some grammar error but for your age it is splendid. By each chapter your grammar is improving too. I think I am in love with Noah author 😅.

4 years ago
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Eking_James
Eking_James

I like the idea of the main character fighting back against the rules of their society. It makes for an interesting premise and can go a variety of ways. In the 5 chapters I have read, I felt that the character description were quite devoid of charm and that statement can go for most of what I've read. Emotions aren't shown, but told directly to the reader. (Ex: Liam was angry, Dazzle was shocked, Dazzle was scared, etc.) You want to describe their emotions, not tell them. For example, you could say Liam's blood boiled like lava instead of using the word angry. The text was also very bland at times since the word choices were basic. I recommend a thesaurus to spice up your story. Overall, this novel has a very unique premise and that's the first step to fame. Work on what I said and I can assure you'll gain massive popularity.

4 years ago
3
Aryna_Stan
Aryna_Stan

Intriguing and enrapturing! I could relate to and understand Dazzle, her struggles and the wrongs done to her. Revenge isn't an healthy path in life but I can enjoy a good book centered around it.

4 years ago
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Chi_Babe_1834
Chi_Babe_1834

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4 years ago
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Indira_Mary
Indira_Mary

Most awesome book ever The thriller was at peak Everyday I come to check if u posted next chapter. Nice work All the best U r doing good

4 years ago
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AinaWang
AinaWang

Reveal Spoiler

4 years ago
2
marichat_nettenoir
marichat_nettenoir

Intriguing, this book is so very interesting. The title is what hooked me in the first place, and kudos to the author for writing such a wonderful book[img=recommend]

4 years ago
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QueenYen
QueenYen

This novel is extremely intriguing, the title is catchy, and I can't believe I found this book only today. Kudos to the author. [img=recommend]

4 years ago
2
shaznalye06
shaznalye06

Nice work author, there were some grammar errors but your book was really captivating! Keep writing and Don't give up! I like the way you explain the characters and stuff!!!!

4 years ago
2
RicJBS
RicJBS

I do honest reviews. Always. So, sorry if you feel bad. I really liked the story. It had a feel that the middle aged century was brought into a modern world story. The struggles of a young girl living a life in the shadows of the males. I love the concept. But i am pretty dissatisfied by the grammar. I, as a new reader and writer, look for the grammar and vocabulary first. Vocabulary was on point but the grammar needs to be edited thoroughly.

4 years ago
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THE_WORDSMITH
THE_WORDSMITH

Sis, you gotta check that grammar and do some thorough editing. The story is very intriguing. I also like the way the main characters were explained before but you missed out jenny. Other than that the story is nice and I have added it to my library as well.

4 years ago
2
nixrsr
nixrsr

this litterally got me hooked! very good story! i would recommend this to anybodu who will ask me which story i read is amazing! i would definitely add this to my collection!

4 years ago
2
Justheguy
Justheguy

I don't see any problems there and all. But, the small things like good grammar (e.g. stop points and captials etc) should be checked. These stuff could get new readers to turn away thinking that 'oh, it has bad grammar so the next chapters going to be bad or something' but that's my opinion. Good Work!

4 years ago
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MyCatPaws
MyCatPaws

The world background description is superb. The scenes are well described and written. The characters are nicely done. Great job author, keep up the good work 🤗

4 years ago
2
bibiyenini
bibiyenini

The storyline and the blurb is great! It will make you hooked up to the first chapter of it! Revenge is the best part, but it is a dangerous thing to do really! Great job!

4 years ago
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