The plot is very intriguing.. Creative names for the characters... It could do with some minor edits, but overall a very good read. Seems like the next Harry Potter franchise in the making...
6 years ago
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Kavita_Chittiappa
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6 years ago
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Milind
Hey guys author here I've given my self only a four star because this is my first novel ever so please be honest about what you think of my novel even if it is negative I will try improving on any negative feedback thank you.
The plot is very intriguing.. Creative names for the characters... It could do with some minor edits, but overall a very good read. Seems like the next Harry Potter franchise in the making...
Reveal Spoiler
Hey guys author here I've given my self only a four star because this is my first novel ever so please be honest about what you think of my novel even if it is negative I will try improving on any negative feedback thank you.