First time writing a fanfic. I will try to update everyday, but it might change since right now am on winter break.
What if Luffy had an older brother. What if that older brother was then taken by Garp to the marines and trained to join then. Follow Sage on his journey to rise through the ranks of the marines and become strong to protect his brothers
Warning I do not own any character of one piece they all belong to Eiichiro Oda
Just want to tell the author to continue this book and not drop it like most light novels, one piece fan fictions with a marine main character are hard to find
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Great fanfiction plz more.
Overall pretty good for a one piece novel Need more chapters. Good character development and design. As long as the MC doesn't ruin Luppy's main stories all good
Please dont drop this fanfic, i really like your story. Please keep updating. And please no HAREM, or i have no choice to leave :(.......…......... ............................................................
I like the story and how you develop the protagonist without being strong till the start. You just need to watch the grammar and i think your story will be popular very rapidly. In general, i like very much your work and hope you don’t drop it 👍👌
I love stories like these but it's the end ................................................................ ............................................................... .............................................................. ............................................................. Thanks author-San.
this is a really great book!!! Pliz keep continueing!!! Pliz update!!! ...........................................................................................
Very good sad it got dropped 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Comeback and write PLEASE, it a great story. So few one piece fanfic do anything to marines. It adds a new dynamic of having a marine part of the young generation among the Luffy brotherhood. Cony cool and all but his story time skip too much
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not bad tho it's need more chapters. 8/10 I like the story development of this fanfic it's very unique from the other fanfic I've read before.
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Could be better but I wish for more. Tho, Does he use a sword? he seems like the type of person to use a sword. Like the one below, but ice blue, or made of crystal.