"To deceive the enemy one must first deceive your allies." Is not something which applies to this war. An adventure of subverting expectations, a hero comes to defeat... Well to lead... No, what *is* he doing?
Writing quality is good has alot of potential and for the story it's very interesting where the MC is using hero status to reform a kingdom through strategy and technological development
Writing quality is good has alot of potential and for the story it's very interesting where the MC is using hero status to reform a kingdom through strategy and technological development