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[Host detected. System activated]
“What's going on?”
[Host, I am the system. I will help You Build Your Empire. You have arrived in a world called Proxima Center. It is 10 times bigger than your planet]
In This story, we follow the life of Alberto, a World War II veteran who was killed in action during the war.
But God decided to give him another life. He sends him to a fantasy world. This fantasy realm is ten times the size of Earth, teeming with legendary creatures and vast nations that rival even the might of the Mongol Empire. Where our main character will build his country entirely from scratch using the system given by God. A powerful system that is capable of making him a powerful being
So let's enjoy our main character's journey together.
Join Alberto on his epic journey as he transforms from a soldier into a sovereign, building alliances, facing formidable foes, and perhaps even discovering love amidst the chaos.
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— ★ This story is perfect for fans of fantasy, politics, science fiction, Horror, Conquest, and romance. If you enjoy complex characters, intricate plots, and richly detailed world-building, then this is the story for you. |★|
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I absolutely love the story. The only thing that I don't like is that you keep changing the POV in every chapter, and it keeps throwing me off with the narrative, but overall, I enjoy this kind of novel, and I hope you won't drop it like a lot of authors do!!!
I love the story. it just needs to work on emotional state of the characters between the FL and ML more. but it is very good and keep up the good work Author and never give up
👏👏👏👏👏👏 Good character buildup and the story is compelling. Can't wait to read more!
This is a great story. Quite remarkable as the story telling and the back ground is well designed. Plus, the writing style is quite simple and goes in a good flow. Great book and will surely enjoy it
From where I am, everything is good. I like Alberto as a character and has room for further growth. I still find problems with the world building, mostly the magic system.
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This novel literally took me back in time. Nice world, a really impressing sc Fi, almost like fantasy. Good job. Keep up the good work author
i love these kind of stories. keep up the good work :) i will keep reading it and supporting you , author. more give me moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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The story seems good so far, writing is consistent and without extra flair. World building is good, MC is adapting to his surroundings being a 20th century soldier, not familiar with this plot. It gives a feeling of realism.
The story started out really well, but after the continental war and the abilities he got, it went down the drain. There was a quest that emphasised cooperation, and the MC was following it, but then that got thrown out of the window pretty quickly.
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one of the best novels in this application
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this novel is cool. Keep up the good work and update it