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It was somewhat interesting but things that I hate from this story - Has one of worst pacing I have ever seen - No actual plot - This book wants make the mc psychopathic killer but He was no personality whatsoever - I like evil mc but he tries to be edgy and is bad at it - One moment He is freaking out worrying about his life suddenly gets brave without a cause So why do make him a pussy just make him Lion in next sentence - Stat points and hate points are very inaccurate Author is very bad at math There a lot of mistakes - World background is also bad and uninteresting Mc gets OP way too fast believe me I like OP mc but this is a disgrace One shots every enemies and Mc is overall dumb and stupid Villian type mc Should have somewhat intelligence or any Type of mc Should have more intelligence than his guy In Conclusion: I would not recommend this story I gave it a 2 star for the writing quality and update stability all in all this is a bad story with a forced Edgy with no personality Dumb horrible killer MC If you still like it Well we all have our own taste in books for newcomers It's not a good story

OMG it was so good I read the whole thing in a single night , this book was beyond good. It was fast paced with an op mc. Awesome . You should continue writing.😂😭😭😂😂

What do you get when you find a Beta Japanese character from a novel like Arifueta and give him a system. A boring edgy trash dumpster character who gets raped in prison and turns into some fukers bitcch. Everything is so forced you add random ****t plots to this novel to add the edge to your Mc lietrally every fucking character in this story besides the Mc is evil and has no personality. I', not buying this ****t. Who gives a ****k about your dumb Main character. We can't even root for him. I feel nothing for him. I could watch the guy get raped while eating popcorns and drinking corona. Oh? Corona, Aha, so unimaginative the first thing you do upon making Mc move to the next world is make him create the Corona Virus and then let it destroy some fucking city where it originated from. Seriously. I hope you look back at your writing and feel fuckingg embarassed writing this uninteresting bull **** while you wallow in your demented mind for hours writing ****t out of your ass and retranslating it into words. Here's your review! Spend your hours writing more ****t I ain't gonna read it. Aha!

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First chapter mc before reincarnation (without any powers):gets robbed by gangsters,got kicked like sh*t. mc after reincarnation (without any powers but with an extra system which just awakened): proceeds to beat the sh*t out of the robber with the 'techique he apparently saw in tv' ofcourse with a knife. So the first time he didn't do anything because he didn't 'remember' any fighting techniques.ofcourse from the tv.

Good, but the English is a little iffy. Story is immersive and good. ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w ***w

OK if youre looking for a good story with decent editing that...makes sense lol this book isnt for you. If you want an OP MC rampaging thru fast paced murder and mayham with ultra thick plot armor and lots of laughs give this a try

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Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!! Exp Sect was here!!!

It's so freaking good but the rate of the chapter that are produced can be fixed but not gonna complain anymore but the writing quality and word count is so great that it took a few minutes to even the fastest reader to read properly

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