The Uzumaki
Author: Newler
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This is a naruto fanfic.
I don’t own any characters of naruto but the new things.
Ps : English is my third language so do help me correct if I made some mistakes.
A child with two different eye colors find himself in the world with only two jutsu that he for some reasons, known how to use.
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Another way to start a naruto fanfic. ------------------------ a question: -Will he meet Kushina and save some Uzumakis? - Will you have wives? , I don't say put 10 or 8, with 4 enough, they would be: + kushina. + mikoto. + tsume etc. ------------------------ and finally, hopefully it will harness its power. It would be interesting if the protagonist were the father of "naruto" and "sasuke", "itachi". - After getting married, she has her children, who would be the canon, she can follow the canon to the end where she can help "Kaguya", because she is a good person, only that he · retired · had a lot of negative energy and betrayal of his children he made it as it is. - for him Harem is a good candidate.
dude for your FF.....put it FF..I love it but bru I found it by luck.......also is the MC going to be a retard?... ie: he was almost murdered...abused..basically had a **** life...so is he going to be like naruto and be some optimistic **** that'll help the village and be a optimistic retard..or is going to be darker [not evil but dark....dosnt take **** from anyone] and get his revenge.?......suggestion: keep him smart dark and OP....add some romance and fluff....just build it....dont make him an optimistic retard...get revenge............if harem keep it small...GL....**: post this on FF
I see that I still do not start the main thing so that you advance your story, I hope you save Kushina, one of my favorite characters, for her bellesa and also for her character. followed by another that would be "mikoto", for the same reason but more loving.
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