Conquerer of Worlds

I'm here to give your story genuine criticism not just some repeated line over and over again by some bot so I'm doing what they can't giving your story a review and criticism, Your story is good I'll say that your writing style is nice and convenient to read its probably one of the best parts of the story. Though your writing style is clear and the formatting is nice. You should probably slow down with your writing and think through what your writing and try and expand on some early plot points. Reading the first few chapters I felt confused large portions of the story which I felt like should have been explained were skipped over. Or vaguely brushed over it felt sort of rushed. A good story needs a solid foundation you should take your time building that foundation rather than trying to push the story right into the action. Your story will be popular as long as you continue writing just take your time and flesh things out connect stuff together and put some more focus into the story rather than how to get through it. Lastly, I recommend that you start to create a posting schedule so you don't stress yourself out trying to push out as many chapters as possible. It's best to wait for a day or so before posting the next chapter that way it gets as much exposure as possible and appears more frequently on the updated list so more people can see it. Also if you ever make more chapter than you need to hesitate to stockpile them and release it later it'll make your life much easier if you suddenly hit writer's block or don't have time to write. Most importantly enjoy what you do don't feel stressed by the need to post and try and force things that'll only kill your enthusiasm just write as much as you want or feel comfortable with its your story so don't push yourself doing what you won't enjoy.