[Earthlings! You have been summoned to participate in the Universe's Armageddon...]
[The first batch of beta testers are now being issued!]
[A total of 10 million spots have been issued!]
[You have been selected!]
"What the F***" Arthur, a teenager in the slums shouted as he heard the global announcement.
[Talent Awakening!]
[System...Error!]
[SSS Talent: Primordial Summoner]
By the time the game had merged with reality, Arthur already has dozens of legendary summons to aid him against the forces of evil.
[You have summoned the SSS-Level "Primordial Dragon"!]
[You have extracted the SSS-Level Skill "Berserk"!]
Great story so far, the summons have personalities. Especially the lazy cat lmao, great read for slice of life and online game genre so far. I will fo another review later.
Read first 40 chapters and found it very interesting but author had just been uploading for 1 month so I am stacking until he uploads more than 300 chapters. Hope author doesn't drop this novel really liked it and also upload atleast 3 chapter per day hopefully 4 but will make do with 3
Already at Chapter 72 and it was great! I just want to ask if when, by any chance. the girl named Jasmine will go? HAHAHAHAHHA She's becoming annoying already
Author here, its my first time writing a game novel. So i hope you let me know how you find it and if any improvements can be made. The novel will be focused on the Aramageddon and on reality. It won’ be fixed only on the game, reality will also have crucial and significant impact on the Mc’s life. The novel will also have romance, and some sort of slice of life into it. The mc is just 14 years old whilst his sister is 15, so don’t expect him to do everything perfectly although he isnt dumb and will mostly pick the right decision. The mc is op, but the pacing will be slow to medium, do let me know if you like it or hate it. Ask any questions here, and thank you for reading this far.
The world dosnt make sense. He got a SSS ranked skill (Luck) which supposedly gives him infinite luck and it legit hasn't even done anything. With infinite luck you would expect that from killing a level 1 rabbit a A ranked sword or some God level item would drop but he gets uncommon items. Also with infinite luck you would expect litterally every piece of damage he does would be like a critical hit. Spoiler it's not. Why even give him the skill if your not gonna implement it. 😒
I have only read so far, so I can't say much about update stability or world background, but my main concern is just how stupid the MC is and without any kind of common sense, it's actually quite frustrating to read, considering the MC has such a high intelligence stat you would think he had atleast a slightly higher intelligence then stupid people, but as of right now I can say the stats are definitely a lie.
author i have a suggestion rather than making mc too op why not have him summon a living armor and no i don't mean a armor with sentience but a armor than moves on it's own but is empty in the inside so mc can just stay inside and have the armor as his bodyguard which would move on it's own or a golem with a proper place inside for mc to sit inside kinda like a mecha but the golem moves on it''s own i think they are good options for summons that would make it so that mc won't be a glass cannon while still being a summoner
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I'd like to rate it higher, but sadly, I can't. all the free chapters have progressed with such slow pacing that im left frustrated and feeling cheated honestly. nothing ever actually gets accomplished, and the cat summon is talked about so much that it gets annoying to keep reading how useless it is. Any reader can retain that info, but it's shoved at our face over and over again. Idk, not my style of book at all and not one I can honestly recommend.
i made it through all but the last 2 free chapters. in game chapters are short and mc doesnt do anything but complain out the cat. out of game chapters are mostly inner dialogues. it sucks cause as soon as you start getting into the game, the author gotta go through 4 chapters of mc inner dialogue about the same thing thats already been dialogued about.
looking good so far. Great promise but seems too early since we are barely 150 chaps in. I just hope it doesnt turn to shit in the long run.
Ooooh...i liked it...it's really a good story
Really great novel overall but my only problem is the story is slower than I thought (for me I guess