Mana Star System: Soul Rebirth
-Accepted, Welcome Donis. This is the [Mana Star System].-
This book is about our protagonist, Donis Laurent, exploring the magic world of Erazar. Knowing nothing of this world, he'll have to face whatever this second try at life has to throw at him.
A world where everyone has a system, knows of magic, and is ruled by the strong. His ability to thrive in this world will only be limited by his drive, and not his aptitude. Born with the rarest blessing, seen only once before in the last few hundred years, Donis will have to face the greed of all the old monsters of Erazar.
Hi, this is Nospacess, and it's my first novel. The uploads will be slightly erratic at first as I'm still trying to figure out a writing schedule, but I hope to release a chapter a day, and if things permit, two chapters a day. Each chapter will be 1.5k-2.5k words at least. I would love any and all criticism, and want to make the story grow with the reader. So if you have anything you want to point out, add, or question, I'll read every comment.
The new cover is done by "ivanwithvodka" on fiverr! Big thank you for the commission and the timely delivery!
So far so good. Technically the update schedule is not set in stone yet but I’ll still give it five stars. ————————————————— Keep up the good work!
This novel deserves a read to any that are looking for a great fantasy novel it first follows the typical norms of all reincarnation novels but has a many slight but significant differences such as there is a real need/reason for the mc wanting to become the strongest
Keep writing so good, and more more more more more more more more more chapter, thanks for your hard working, I hope you can continue to write this nove.
I really enjoy this book. While it’s not entirely original with systems and transmigration, it does have a unique twist to it, no signs of a harem, which I like (seriously why do they have harems, you’re writing for antisocial men, and women, neither of which are interested in reading about a guy sleeping around with 7 women). It defiantly has my attention
I relly like the concept of this novel it s not like that it s the first time seeing a novwl with it but i think this one is well made. For me everythink thats more than 7 chapters a week is good so no problems for me there to. Overall we haven t seen that much of the world and charackters but it s only chapter 50. One think i relly liked was the kidnapping of donis nice idea
Amazing so far, loving the attitude and the progression. Keep up the good work, thanks for alleviating my birdie during this Quarantine. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
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A good story so far but felt rushed from MC getting kidnaped till arc end hope author will slow down a bit and author should give a overview of the said world power system overall good reading exp
Wow, what a story. Most times, when authors write a fantasy novel, especially one with a system in it, they tend to get caught up in the fantasy and end up with a stale, static novel whose characters and world are unrealistic. This novel does not make the same mistake. It is dynamic with world-building that is measured and deliberate. The story does not have any logical holes and you can flow really well with it and its characters. The characters are largely realistic and multifaceted. The only issue with the story is that most of the other characters are not fleshed out enough. We do not know their backgrounds or motivations which makes it more difficult to connect with them fundamentally. There have been slight improvements to this in recent chapters but it still is not there yet. All in all, I would highly recommend for anyone into fantasy because, system or no, this novel is spectacular.
Not bad System Novel with High Mana and magic action and development. Reincarnated on magic world from simple earth life? (Light Spoiler alert. ............................................................. Really? No.........not so simple.....well played Author San!
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Love it. Please keep writing (:
Writing quality and stability of updates is good so 5* But the rest... ehhh... Story is cliche reincarnation and being genius in magic. Nicely written and all. The Mc as a child is really beta but in a nice way. Then he is kidnapped and suffers. The author did preparation to upgrade his way of thinking. But the Mc didn’t change at all! He is still a genius, he is still useless even with all the magic and weapon training! He again almost dies and the only thing he’s good at is crying! He is afraid of authority and is shaking when meeting a normal guard but is able to speak leisurely with the strongest mages in his region! Really it’s a nice read if you’re not expecting anything but even till chapter 70 the Mc is beta. Not worth wasting time if you’re waiting for the Mc to change.