Its very good but it needs to work on uploading faster, but all around a good fanfiction to read and get in vested in. It will dazzle your eyes.
4 years ago
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Syahrul_Azhar
My friend you need to use grammarly app, because there is a lot of misspelling word, and there is too much change of point of view, it could be nice story and im waiting for it
Stockpile quirk: its literally an upgraded version of superman's ability an yet he's soo weak
Its very good but it needs to work on uploading faster, but all around a good fanfiction to read and get in vested in. It will dazzle your eyes.
My friend you need to use grammarly app, because there is a lot of misspelling word, and there is too much change of point of view, it could be nice story and im waiting for it Stockpile quirk: its literally an upgraded version of superman's ability an yet he's soo weak