A boy trapped in a failing town that shares the same fate as others. He is one of the many teens who goes about on jobs to help support his family. The Commodity Company holds the town in its crutches, what is the intention of this company for these towns? Jinn Young doesn’t know, but he knows what his mother told him.
Small communities can be strong together, but their inner conflicts can tear them apart.
This story has the makings of a masterpiece. When I start it my thoughts were... “Uh huh. Ok, I like this. This is pretty good.” I’m amazed at how long the chapters are and the amount of detail the author has put into making and describing the world within these pages. Keep it up! I wish you the best of luck!