Angels' Edge
“The twin blades flashing back and forth were somehow graceful as they painted the surrounding walls red.” The world has recently recovered from a large-scale crisis in 2245. From the remains of the broken governments rose the tech companies that had led the people out of this crisis. One such company is EDGE, which is the leading weapons design company in the global market. Their two most powerful weapons are androids, a male named 4-HN, and a female named 5-AE. Their job? To assassinate high-ranking leaders of EDGE's competition. 5-AE, however, is different. Despite her eyes being designed to change color based off of the emotions she feels (a method of keeping their androids' actions in check), not once have hers deviated from the listless silver that indicated feeling absolutely nothing.
Just shamelessly reviewing my own content...Anyway, this story is about two assassin androids who work for a large weapons company known as EDGE. I intend to update it with about ten chapters weekly. Enjoy!
If this was food I would call it delectable! These Chapter shows us the inquisitive mind of the writer. I hope to see this continue in this novel and many more to come!
Loving this so far! Great characters and an amazing plot. Very interested in 5-AE and how she will develop as a character throughout the novel. Very excited for more chapters!!
Great writing and very interesting story line... I'm excited to continue reading the book
Love the writing style; the combat scenes are very intense, and the idea of showing emotions with their eyes is very creative. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Very interesting setting, you could just read the prologue and see the setting and how it applies to the characters, very well written and I'm excited for more chapters.
I like your contrasting characters. They spark curiosity. Your dystopian vision of the future is Terminator meets Humans, but I am confident it will become something entirely yours when you are done. You have a simple flair and succinct style that is easy to read and interesting. I look forward to your next Chapters.
I found the opening to the book really intriguing. I like the writing style. Very good read. I’m looking forward to more chapters coming out. Keep up the good work!
This fresh take on a dystopian future is compelling and fun. The relationship between the protagonist pair is teeming with possibilities and I’m not sure if this is going to be a tragedy or a romance. Either way, this is more than just an action story. There is a deeper message slowly building. Nice writing style and a fun read.
Great writing and very interesting story line... I'm excited to continue reading the book. ..............................................................
I like it a lot it was easy to read and flowed very nicely, I can’t wait to see the next chapter to see what happens next and how the plot will unfold.
Very good book so far can't wait for the rest the characters are very well made and the creative ideals go together so well very well made keep up the good work.
The two main characters continue to unfold before our eyes revealing difficult histories riddled with pain. The world is a grim dystopian future where acts of kindness are rare and only the strongest prosper. This is a quest for both identity and purpose as our antagonist struggle to obtain freedom. Will they know what to do with this elusive commodity should they find it?
Both of the main characters are very likable and the story is developing very well. Coming from someone who is generally very picky about plot and writing quality, the character development is great, the plot is unique (not like the generic "transported to another world with random powers" or "randomly and inexplicably gets an overpowered system" garbage) and the writing style for the fight scenes are very intense. The dystopian take on the environment is also well done, and the character interactions are meaningful, with a little humor thrown in to lighten the mood. The only small complaint I have is that the chapters are a bit short.
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