Two boys fall for a girl at the same time, but it's not as it seems. Both developing complicated feelings for each other along the way of their petty rivalry.
i think so far the story is well kept and interesting i like how the characters are named as well gonna vote for u keep it up !!! and i like the way u write but why did u not post for sooo long that is why i decided to comment something . i think you can be better !!!!
5 years ago
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jake13579
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5 years ago
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Daoist474604
The story starts of decently. I like how the characters are introduced and the pacing off the story. Hopefully the later chapters will be good along with update schedule.
i think so far the story is well kept and interesting i like how the characters are named as well gonna vote for u keep it up !!! and i like the way u write but why did u not post for sooo long that is why i decided to comment something . i think you can be better !!!!
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The story starts of decently. I like how the characters are introduced and the pacing off the story. Hopefully the later chapters will be good along with update schedule.