Deleted on 30 of May 2020

Deleted on 30 of May 2020

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Author: MaxwellKHA
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RachelRuth
RachelRuth

This is pretty well made xD I didn't know what to expect with the title... but so far, the story is quite pulling! A transmigration story that has a protagonist who doesn't like being human become a demon. I wonder what we can expect in the future chapters, but I'm positive that it'll be good :)

5 years ago
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SAM_Z
SAM_Z

Woah. That's a surprisingly good plot and story start. Looking forward to the rest. I would advise that you focus a bit in sentence construction, that will increase the whole story by a level because that is the only con I saw.

5 years ago
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Supersam362
Supersam362

This is a great story, it starts in a way that I've never seen before. I'm a fantasy nut and I've never seen someone be rencarnated from a space mafia to a demon. Top notch creativity, and very interesting plot. Can't wait to see where it goes.

5 years ago
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AI380
AI380

That's a really interesting story setting, especially those dark elements in the prologue, I found it's really interesting. Your ideas for the story is really special and different from any other works I have read, I don't know how should I put it, but it's a good different. I'm impressed at your courage and creativity in writing this unique idea of story background.

5 years ago
1
Tinalynge
Tinalynge

Well wasn't that an interesting start. There were only two chapters out when this review was written, but it is fully deserving a full five stars! At the beginning I kinda wanted to dislike the MC. The whole of first chapter was very weird for me. I was full of complex emotions, but then I read the final sentence and a shiver ran down my spine. Then I came to the second chapter, not sure what to expect. But upon reading it I found that I really liked it! I really am looking forward to where this author will take the story, it is quite intriguing and exciting. writing is good, don't know about stability of updates yet, but story development s good, character design is good, world background hasn't been seen much yet.

5 years ago
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MokouFriedChicken
MokouFriedChicken

A good start, with minimal grammar errors and good prose. This'll go far given enough time. Dialogue flows organically, but you might want to flesh it out a bit more. Describe the character's cadence or subtle mannerisms during dialogue to give it more impact and individuality. Other than that? I'll see what becomes of this after a few more chapters. Keep on writing 👍

5 years ago
1
qiujiu068
qiujiu068

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4 years ago
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Hacku
Hacku

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5 years ago
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bikko
bikko

Interesting story. It begins in a very unique way and has quite a lot of potential. There aren't too many stories following villainous characters and reincarnation stories are, in my opinion, always fun. Especially when its a villain being reincarnated! It seems like it'll be a very fun story and I can't wait to read more.

5 years ago
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TheDevilYouKnow
TheDevilYouKnow

An interesting concept though the writing needs a little polishing I suggest Grammarly, helps with my own atrocious writing, you perhaps went a little over the top with the rape and selling of children perhaps dial down his cruelty a little or redirect it 2 fold to adults it makes it more endearing.

5 years ago
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CrazyG
CrazyG

It's the first time, I'm reading this kind of story. It's definitely nice to read. In fact, I'm already in love with this universe and it's characters. In the beginning only, the ML is weirdo. Your idea is really good.

5 years ago
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Eiffel_Olympus
Eiffel_Olympus

This is so good. I really loved the plot it was really interesting and how you start to build the characters and the world. I'm waiting for the future update its really good and worth to read.

5 years ago
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