Mate Detector
Ace Ryker the Alpha Lord of Tartarean, has a problem, Alpha females have all but ceased to be born in over a quarter of a century. True- life mates need to be united for Alpha females to be conceived and finding one’s life mate has gotten harder over the years. There has not been a true-life mate pairing since his own mother and father. In a vain attempt to bring forth more life mate matches; Ace throws a festival together in order to round up potential partners. What he did not expect was Alexis Darling.
Alexis Darling has had a rough life ever sense her Father’s untimely departure, leaving behind a wife and four children. When opportunity comes knocking on her door, she jumps at the chance to save her home and family. Things turn interesting when she finds out a few surprises about herself that could either doom the Tartarean region or rescue it completely.
I suggest finding an editor as you occasionally misspell words. If you want me to edit I'll be good with the words, but grammar isn't my strongest suit. Overall it's a pretty good start, keep it up!
I was really surprised when starting to read the book because it’s based in a different world and setting. But it drew me in so quickly with the character details and their relationships between each other is shown so beautifully. I do wish that there chapters posted more during the week but I understand how hard that is to keep up with. Overall i really love where the story is going🥰
I didn't think I would like this story but it intrigued me from the beginning. I would love to read the rest of this story and for the author to continue to write stories.
I absolutely love the plot and character development! This is a story that draws you in with the detail, it is beautifully written, please continue to dazzle us!
The pace is fantastic, Alex is really focused and the mate bond isn't building up too quickly. Looking forward to seeing how the jigsaw fits together, with the other alpha's. And what exactly was her mother trying to warn her about.
Love everything about this book, it is well written, and I can actually feel the story. I love when a book makes me feel connected, and so far this story has me all in my feels. Thank you and please continue to write!!!