Ethereal World: Vicious Cannon Fodder's Immortality Road

YueYue in white hair Her right eye is purple Her left eye is carmine red The mandala lotus is carmine red and purple color. I don’t know how to edit her eyes’ color T-T Imagine by yourself ღゝ◡╹)ノ♡ Source: Pinterest

Shenlian YingYue Age: Twenty years old

Hi this is Author. In case, you haven’t seen our YueYue’s face. Huang Ying Yue (Female Protagonist) Age around 16-17 years Note: Her current appearance. ♡＾▽＾♡

I’m add some characters here. Guess who are these men? (✦ ‿ ✦) Don’t be mistaken, not all the men I showed here will come out one after another. Some characters will come out later. Picture: From Pinterest. I don’t know who drew these. But I love these. If you know who draw this please tell me. I’ll give the credit to the owners.

Xiao Yun (YunYun) [Main role] Contract spirit beast of Huang Ying Yue Rainbow color pupils (I can’t find picture of the colorful pupils -_-) ♡＾▽＾♡ Picture from Pinterest

Love the storyline, it's fresh, as normally the main lead that transmigrated is not that kind or patient. The mindset of these characters are really thought provoking and make one speechless, like the original female lead, she is rather full of herself.... I gave the character design a 4 as the character of FL is a bit too good to be true hard to believe that there is such a person. Nevertheless, it is a wonderful story and I recommend it! (If I didn't use up my votes, I would have voted....) Good work author!

So far so good...this type of novel is my cup of tea Request to the author I Like reverse harem very much but can you give our fl her own group of men? I don't like the idea that she get the original fl men. For me if they fell for the ori fl tricks then they are not worth it.

As someone with a preference for Villain like characters who work in the realm of morally grey, I can hands down say YueYue thus far in my top list of favorite Female leads. I’m particular about what I read not because there aren’t plenty of books that aren’t good but because I read too much into character settings and character depth and end up fixating on certain aspects so while they’re good, they don’t immerse me as the author has done with this story. I was worried when I read about how kind YueYue is, skeptical to say the least ( maybe I’m a villain as well) because their actions and words don’t tend to aline with the characters settings portrayed. YueYue is sincere in her actions and words, she holds her values and ethics closely, she determined to stick to those values but also to grow and adapt in a different world while maintaining those beliefs she’s certain of. The author has done wonderfully in showing the emotions the characters feel, the world setting explained with details that don’t feel too drawn out, and immersing the reader into the realm our Author has weaved. Magical it is of course. I look forward to reading more. Oh and there’s lots of laughs as well~~ other readers👀👀 come and join the potato club~~~

Such a kind and gentle girl died so young…sighed… Yueyue, Will everyone bully you after you arrived in that world? ╥﹏╥

Initially I was very excited to read this book. The storyline began very differently from the other novels. But as I read on, the female character, Huang Ying Yue, slowly came across as boring and insipid. I know that the author tried to portray her as a “humble and sincere” person but the description “dull eyes”, and how she kept trying to be so “low-keyed”, etc. adds to the boring and insipid feeling that I get about this character, so much so that I skimmed through the chapters. It’s a pity because this plot is so different and it can be so exciting and interesting.

This story needs some serious editing. I don't know if it's because it's a translation or the authors first language isn't English but it's quite jarring to read. Which is a shame because it sounds so interesting! I'll come back to this one in the future sometime.

Writing quality: ⭐⭐ Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Updating stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐ .... This is my rating for this novel and I read up to chapter 104 while giving my review. To be fair, I like the plot and I enjoyed reading it despite not being a fan of reverse harem (or harems in general). The only major problem I have with the novel is the writing quality, hence, the 2 star rating. The pacing is okay and I haven't found any inconsistency with how the dialogue was written, so it's good. The problem was on the use of words and the grammar (though I'm one to talk). There are many grammatical errors I found here and the misuse of the nouns in a sentence like instead of using her/him, it was written as she/he. And also the appropriate use of the -ed,-ing, or -es/s at the end of the word, especially the past and present pronouns. Not just this, I also found errors on the use of punctuation marks, which changes the entire meaning of the sentence. For example, when the author wrote (note: not accurate), "Master, I will teach you something." where the person saying this was the Master himself to his disciple, but this sentence, with the comma (,) symbol being misplaced, changed the whole meaning to where the person saying this was addressing someone as Master and wanting to teach them something. The correct sentence should be, "Master will teach you something." or just the "I will teach you something." The example I gave happened many times in the chapters I've read, not just the Master part but when the people addressed themselves in the 3rd pov but with the added comma after that, which changed the whole meaning of the sentence. Not being mean or anything, but I really suggest to author-sama that you find an editor to help your wonderful works, but if you cannot find them, there's some tools that can help you check for errors like Grammarly or chatgpt or something to improve your work.

very lovely story. I like the development of the female character she is gentle but also does not care about much other than her loved ones and family. to the outside world she is calm and strong. good combination

Story is really good. I recommend oh, and is sima ke xin also a male lead?