.....a tragic fire incident splits a family apart ,leaving wounds regretting and resentful hearts ,after losing his wife and daughter, Josh goes through a series of misfortunes that sends him a dark unknown tunnel of suffer and torture.
...Dilin a beautiful,charmed and adorable young girl grows with a family full of love and warmth with her mother and sister unknowingly aware of the huge secrets hid behind her past,after she comes across two young boys one Jasper and the other Dalis her life changes completely ....what are the secrets burried behind her past?...
Good start. The story look promising I think I will added to my collection. The only flaw I can point out is that you don't put more space between your paragraph it's bit jumbled I have hard time reading it, it's the only flaw that I spotted. Overall the storie is great. Keep up