It's actually great!
The prologue gets you thinking what happened to the mother and you would find yourself already aware that something tragic happened for the parent to be ever so silent at the start.
The chapters could be longer though, and it would be nicer if the settings got described more but hey!
It's doing great
It's actually great! The prologue gets you thinking what happened to the mother and you would find yourself already aware that something tragic happened for the parent to be ever so silent at the start. The chapters could be longer though, and it would be nicer if the settings got described more but hey! It's doing great