There are so many grammatical mistakes in every paragraph you wrote. I had to re-read it multiple times to get the paragraphs to make any sense. It seems like this novel was copied and pasted but with a whole bunch of problems
2 months ago
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MiizStudz
story line seems good but the translation in the first few chapters is not great at all, luckily it gets better, I kept reading to see and it does get a lot better and easier to understand after 3-4 chapters. which is good cas I am looking for a new beast novel where they all update so slowly.
There are so many grammatical mistakes in every paragraph you wrote. I had to re-read it multiple times to get the paragraphs to make any sense. It seems like this novel was copied and pasted but with a whole bunch of problems
story line seems good but the translation in the first few chapters is not great at all, luckily it gets better, I kept reading to see and it does get a lot better and easier to understand after 3-4 chapters. which is good cas I am looking for a new beast novel where they all update so slowly.