Re-writing Our Love
Author: TheLonelyImmortal
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31-years-old Terrence Li died while protecting his first love on her wedding day. To his surprised, the grim reaper let him have another chance at life by being reborn into the past and change his destiny. Now he is back in his teenage years to chase after his first love once more. With a magic notebook that can turns whatever the owner write into reality, Terrence will make sure he won't make the same mistakes in this life.
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Hi, when I read your synopsis, the plot sounded very interesting. But as I read through some of the chapters, the scenes are a bit chaotic and all over the place. I don't mean this in any bad way, I just want you to improve your writing, that's why I am pointing it out. There is potential in the story. The thing I do is either re-read my chapters after writing or just click the speech button so I can hear the mistakes. You should try that. It might be helpful. If you want, I can read more chapters and comment on the errors.
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trash, this mc acts like childish even tho his 31, he doesn't even act like a mature person, he acts like 10 years old and he says his weak but he doesn't even think of using a magic book