Bahut hi pyari story hai.. Aapke likhne ka andaz esa hai ke aisa nahi lagta ke hum kahani padh rahe hai balki esa lagta hai ke hum puri story ko ankho se dekh rahe hain.. Har ek carrector apni bat kahta hua ankho ke samne aa jata hai.. Likhne ka tarika or hero ka naam bahut unique hai
5 years ago
1
Khanshahrukh_Srk
A very good story i really liked this story plss publish more of the chapters i cant wait..ur writing skills is very good n i would like to read more of ur stories
5 years ago
1
naved_khan_6267
Story is awesome n story effect is also good.Story Character Names are very good. Pls post next part asap. I like this story very much.I am giving 10 out of 10.
Bahut hi pyari story hai.. Aapke likhne ka andaz esa hai ke aisa nahi lagta ke hum kahani padh rahe hai balki esa lagta hai ke hum puri story ko ankho se dekh rahe hain.. Har ek carrector apni bat kahta hua ankho ke samne aa jata hai.. Likhne ka tarika or hero ka naam bahut unique hai
A very good story i really liked this story plss publish more of the chapters i cant wait..ur writing skills is very good n i would like to read more of ur stories
Story is awesome n story effect is also good.Story Character Names are very good. Pls post next part asap. I like this story very much.I am giving 10 out of 10.