Who am I, I say I'm a weapon of vengeance, but what do I really want, I believe I am evil, am I?
My dying father held me in his arms; he comforted me and promised me it would all be fine. 'Father, if you lie before you die you'll go to hell' I told him as I tried my best to hold back my tears.
He paused and smiled, then looked at me and said 'Reno, my son do you know what the dead want?' 'Nothing, they don't want a thing' I said. He smiled at me and hung his talisman around my neck.
On that day, my father the great King Raphael Woo died mysteriously.
My father was the leader of the Gaiden, a group that was very much the head of the 'kings' special people gifted with talisman, an organization far beyond the control of the government.
My father made a decree, 'Men and kings are equal' he was a naïve man; in his eyes all men were equal.
He was the strongest king, but there he lied in the courtyard on his knees bleeding profusely and his fellow king, Kang there before him.
I was only 12 when it happened. As I would soon find out without my father life in the Gaiden's court would become a living hell.Same with the rest of my life.
Risen from death, bestowed with fantastic powers and fueled by vengeance he will burn the world!!!
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When I read the synopsis I already knew this book was going to be great and it didnt disappoint me! I have to get it off my chest and say it again but chapter 2 by far is my fav! The writing style is simple but it has that flow to it that makes the readers feel emotional which adds this amazing feel to the story. The plot is also nice and well developed but I felt like at the beginning it was a bit too fast and I wish we wouldve gotten more info. The world building is nicely done, although there arent many chapters out yet but you can still get a feel for it and it draws you in. A novel worth reading and I recommend it to everyone who enjoy a good story with emotional beats!
The Good is very excellently written. Well done my boy. The sky is ur limit.. Shine on like the sky. The next book u wld write wld be about me when am leaving the Presidency. I promise you. Am sure you wlould win no doubt about it.
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A nice read, It's really smooth and has a intriguing story This work is currently in a competition so please support the author by voting for it.
I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)
The book is very interesting. I like the suspense. It's dope. You did a good job on the book. Well done. You are very talented. I can't wait for other chapters. Good job bro 🔥👌
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It was a really nice chapter, keep up the good work. Although before publishing, you check for any mistakes in grammar. Overall, it's a lovely book and has great potential.
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Good story line. The writer continually brought nature into his writing. There is still room for improvement on continuity. The plot is good and well detailed.
Mad oh, this story is mad. I was able to conceive exactly what the author is writing Just in chapter 1 & 2.. Nice story development. Dude.. wait let me pay some homage.; Sensei this is a promising story. Keep the **** up.👍👍
Your writing skills are quite unique and the story development is smooth as well. Though I don't read martial arts genre books much, this novel has turned my views completely. Keep your hardwork! You are doing great!☺️
Good story❣️ Excited to see what happens next! I like it when the main character isn't all perfect and you've done a good job of portraying that
I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm. I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters. There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on. Keep up the good work!
It is really good and has a unique plot.... Best of luck for WPC ......👍👍👍. I Will gonna recommend it to others.