After the heartbreaking loss of her son Harry, Lily Potter is given a single, precious day—a final chance to hold him close. As time slips away, she must choose what truly matters: to let go of pain, silence the distractions of the past, and embrace the love and connection that endures. In this fleeting moment, a mother’s heart fights to reclaim what was lost before it’s too late.
Timeline: (AU) Takes place a day before Harry's 16th birthday after his 5th year at Hogwarts.
Genre: Angst/Drama
Warning: Major character death
Disclaimer: All of J.K. Rowling except the plot
I loved it and hated it .loved it because it was a good au world done perfectly from lily pov. Hated it because I am person likes perfect happy ending . Even though I know they are not possible in real life .
The writing quality is good, better than most on this website. I like the story but I feel as though it doesn't have a specific direction or end goal that it's working towards. I feel like this kind of story is better off being a One-shot, than a many chapter novella. If it had an overarching story, I think I would rate the story higher. There were moments that were quite moving, so I enjoyed that. Keep writing! Even though the ending is non-conclusive, I would be open to reading this for binging purposes. Good job. :)