During a military operation to snuff out a gang of terrorists in the Middle East, a small military platoon consisting of 5 rookie soldiers were caught in a landmine explosion.
When they came to their senses, they found themselves separated and in another world where magic and monsters run rampant and the concept of modern weaponry is non-existent.
With only the guns they brought with them and a Komatsu model light armored vehicle, the small platoon start their new journey through this new, medieval-era world, slaying monsters and making a name for themselves.
This is a great isekai novel that I have read for quite a while. I love the idea of having modern day weapons in to fantasy world, where common folks don't understand the technology. The writing is super. I didn't have any difficulty reading your chapters without a problem. The pace is also great, not too slow nor too fast. I especially like the way you show MC reaction upon seeing the different races in your world. Keep up with your work and I hope you will keep writing. I'm adding your story into my library and will read every chapter in the future. Cheers mate
Read the prologue, I'm really liking the setting and descriptions :) The dialogue flows really well, and despite you admitting to your lack of military knowledge, I admire the theme and effort :)
Interesting world building you have there. Looks promising and interested for more;))) .................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Well written. Quite an interesting start to the story and pretty original. Best of luck! ....................................................................................................
The story is awesome. The author has created a mindblowing concept of military and transmigration. The writing style and narration is beautiful. I am impressed with the way the author has created the plot and the characters. The author knows what is to be portrayed and how to make it interesting. There are no errors, the writing is clear and precise. Overall, this is an amazing book. Great work author.
If I'm going to put it into a few words, goddamn this novel is superb! The grammar and storytelling is so good to the point I thought I was reading a full fledged Japanese Light Novel! I can hardly see any mistakes on the story other than Franciska's behavior although such thing is merely nitpicking of my part. Also I can't forget to mention the huge Gate vibes I'm getting from this story. Already in my library and I'm already looking forward to more chapters!
Liking the story so far, curious about the other soldiers and how they gonna resupply bullets, fuel, etc if thats planned keep it up, 5 stars so far, few errors for 1st 3 chapters, Great job thus far.
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Currently, there are two chapters so it is hard to determine the pace of the story. As for the plot, it seems interesting and different from the other web novel plots out there. I have not seen any misspelled words or vocabulary. For me, the story is captivating since I'm a fan of military genres. As for the writing quality, it seems to be good and decent. So far, I have no complaints since there are only two chapters. As for your question in the forum, here are some tips and tricks in order to gain more readers and views. -Update daily (Readers prefer novels which updates frequently so that they don't tend to be left behind.) -Promote your Novel during Review Swaps. (In this way, other people and authors will know about your work.) -Share (You can share your novel in social media platforms. Just copy the link of your novel and you'll be all set.) Those are just some tips to gain more readers. Keep up the good work author!!!
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great story and characters. I saw you where making this when you posted about it on your Wattpad so I made an account here and read it straight away. love the pacing, character, and story. can't wait for the group to re-unite.
I honestly hope you don't stop writing this now..................... ..........................................................................