Avatar With A System Dropped (Up to Adopt)

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Great first chapter, keep up the good work like you always do author-san.

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I get why people rated it so high, I mean it's an avatar novel and there are so few of them out there. However I can't in good conscience give this a high rating there's just too many plot wholes in this novel starting with chapter 2 ( what kind of parents lets their twelve year old child go travel the world based off of a dream he had about someone who was assumed to be dead for 100 years, not to mention the fact that there is a war going on at the time ).

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it's a great fanfic, the problem is the mc being weak at some scenes and its confusing me on the way you're explaining his actions. paragraphs

The story line is a good idea. If author needs any help with inspiration, just turn to us, your loyal readers will help you! Soren is a great character and I love his laid back attitude. He’s a great MC. And the lion turtle granting bending abilities is a solid explanation.

Over all it's pretty good it's pretty hard waiting for chapters.

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************************** Very good keep it up.*********************************************************************************************

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I'm liking this so far. Great job so far.

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