A Love Conflict

Although i didn't read it yet and seeing that the author is the only one who put a review. as the same fellow. I understand. Here a review...

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This stories so stupid, Look, I read and ENJOYED it till C5 but C6 made me stop and think that this is stupid..... -the reason I loved this till C5 is because it seems to a story a where, the chick wants to find and protect the MC, instead of the other way around [though Mind u MC wants to find his lover, but he has no idea who his lover is]...so yah, this is new,,,I like it BUT god damn the english, its ****ed up...events are misunderstood because of the english, like I've commented on specific parts where the events are ****ed up and misunderstood..author, fix ur english, cause I mean, I have to interpret **** to understand....and I dont want to do that when I read..so yah, I get english might not br ur main lang but u are writing the story in english, and I assume this is cause ur audience is mainly english speakers...so yah,,,pls fix,,,cause ur eng made me drop. Also, the stories is stupid cause of the retarded events like in C1...I mean, the problem could've easily been solved since there was evidence against the cheating chick and MC's true lover could've been with him. Like the evidence is proper ****, messages and pictures are with the lover...its stupid she didn't get him and save him....this is so stupid and its only the first chp Then there the events in C6 that made me drop it, MC basically gets misunderstood and the chick mades him a pariah like a dumb *****, its retarded [just read it, u dont need context understand what I mean]. Also, how the hell is an escort of bodyguards allowed in a classroom?...its retarded. This book has so many retarded moments that could easily be solved. I truly did like the concept, but damn, the execution made me drop, also the english