When the Stars Burn out

The story has a nice ambition behind it. Rather than being trown into the tick of things there is an entire chapeter that gives you the lore of the world. The only thing off is some of the grammar, its good to have multiple people revise the grammer before hand.

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Thank you author for such a detailed piece of work outlining the system, thinking through each character role, planet names, timing and events. I’m intrigue with Zentreya’s fate and the coalition set with the 3 others. I took time to read each chapter details collating the description and facts to undersstand each character’s role better undertanding their end game. looking forward to see if their end game is To create Universe / galaxy they can all can coexist and then how will the balance of power exists. At times, some of the description tends to carry reflection of some sort of cryptic message into each character’s belief’s on their perspective of thier current life and why they behave this way such as astronomus and zentreya - deep. It sets readers to think and read in between the lines. I like to see how that comes together in the end. Well done author and keep going.

I like the concept of this story. Writing is fine, the pacing is good. I personally recommend it to everyone who wants a good read. *Increasing words so I can reach 140 characters lmao*

Reading this gives me the Star Wars vibe. It has a cool concept, I even think the author is into sci-fi which is goood. Reading it blew my mind because i've never read a sci-fi that has the vibe of star wars. I also like the way the author write its because it is detailed.