So far Since it only has two chapters I really like it and I personally believe the author's doing a great job 👌🏽👍🏽 You should definitely read it and decided for yourself but at least give it a try.
5 years ago
5
AshGray
okay so i really like this novel because of the characters and the author's writing skills. I believe if you guys read this you won't be disappointed.So just try reading it Okay?👌
-(this is the first time im writing a review)
4 years ago
2
Artmemis99
J'aime beaucoup cette histoire, l'histoire est bien écrite. La seul chose est que j'ai de la misère avec les POV ( changement de narrateur ). Comme il n'y a pas d'indication que le narrateur change, ca me mélange beaucoup. juste un POV Gill ou POV Avin. sinon super histoire
4 years ago
2
ShoRin
MC is adorable ngl [img=update]And omg he has twins- even better ;-; the character are well written! I can't wait for updates [img=recommend]
4 years ago
1
melany_cruz
tan repetitivo con una pesima escritura y sin creatividad y el desarrollo de la novela esta mal organizado
4 years ago
1
cuddleskrz
10/10 I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter, Wonderful job!! I pretty much just read everything from the first word to last. I got emotional on some parts(both sad and/or happy, etc) Thanks for the story!!
4 years ago
1
rhiane_cerezo
I love it... I enjoyed reading this it's very good and keep up the good work. I'm waiting for the next part☺
It's very amazing
2 years ago
0
jklovr
Look, I’m all into this type of stuff and what not. But this book just didn’t appeal to me. When I read the first chapter I was bored and non-interested. Though I decided to continue on because of the sang, ”Give them a second chance.” Which I did and again it didn’t amuse me at all. Of course this is a personal opinion so please don’t take it to heart.
3 years ago
0
melany_cruz
pesima traducción una escritura horrible y una historia aburrida con un pesimo desarrollo de personajes
So far Since it only has two chapters I really like it and I personally believe the author's doing a great job 👌🏽👍🏽 You should definitely read it and decided for yourself but at least give it a try.
okay so i really like this novel because of the characters and the author's writing skills. I believe if you guys read this you won't be disappointed.So just try reading it Okay?👌 -(this is the first time im writing a review)
J'aime beaucoup cette histoire, l'histoire est bien écrite. La seul chose est que j'ai de la misère avec les POV ( changement de narrateur ). Comme il n'y a pas d'indication que le narrateur change, ca me mélange beaucoup. juste un POV Gill ou POV Avin. sinon super histoire
MC is adorable ngl [img=update]And omg he has twins- even better ;-; the character are well written! I can't wait for updates [img=recommend]
tan repetitivo con una pesima escritura y sin creatividad y el desarrollo de la novela esta mal organizado
10/10 I love it!! Can't wait for the next chapter, Wonderful job!! I pretty much just read everything from the first word to last. I got emotional on some parts(both sad and/or happy, etc) Thanks for the story!!
I love it... I enjoyed reading this it's very good and keep up the good work. I'm waiting for the next part☺ It's very amazing
Look, I’m all into this type of stuff and what not. But this book just didn’t appeal to me. When I read the first chapter I was bored and non-interested. Though I decided to continue on because of the sang, ”Give them a second chance.” Which I did and again it didn’t amuse me at all. Of course this is a personal opinion so please don’t take it to heart.
pesima traducción una escritura horrible y una historia aburrida con un pesimo desarrollo de personajes