starwars the immortal empire
Author: no_name_7540
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Let's all be honest. Anakin shouldn't murder all of those children just because he saw a vision that his wife was going to die.
why not find someone to help her. You fucking idiot
This story will happen 4000bby then transit to right before the naboo blockade
Jack was bing watching the glory of starwars ep1 to ep 6 with his two friends after watching the shit show of the newest ones
(you can argue but ep7 and onward are absolutely shit)
Than honk honk
a fucking truck came out of the fucking sky crushing them underneath
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Could have been a good story but the writer seems to be more of a hobbyist when writing rather than putting effort in. Very Little background or story mostly just either dialogue or action.
The author doesn't give a F*** about his story. Wich mean the story is very badly written, structure syntax grammar are awefull :x If the author does not give a f*** why should we?
Terrible... only good thing about this book is he was almost writing in English... poor premise, uninteresting characters and an idiot who thought he was a capable writer but he's just a loser with bad English and low intelligence... ig and he's American and still fail at English... best bet DROPPED
Can you atlest do(alex:Hi my name is alex.) ore ("hi my name alex"Alex) so you can atles separate information and when someone is talking 😁And good luck
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