Till It Rains (stopped)
Nearly a millennium ago, the whole world was plunged into the depths of despair. The Apocalypse. The world was filled with seas of dead bodies, overriden by demons, and what was left now was nothing but the fallen ruin of civilisation.
The world was riddled with the Undeads, zombie-like spawns born from the blood of those who died in the Apocalypse. Kingdoms were forced to retreat behind forged walls, and those who were unfortunate enough to be left behind... Well, they turned into savages who could not conform to the norms of society.
Rain, a boy freed from the shackles of slavery, has been shackled with an all-new set of chains. This time, through a Contract formed with none other than the Grim Reaper himself, for the sole purpose of exacting his revenge on the killer of those he loved most: The Dark Marksman.
As Rain continued to make his way through the wasteland that was left of the world, he slowly got closer and closer in finding out the true identity of his sworn nemesis. But little did he realise that he himself was slowly turning into the thing he hated the most.
This story is pretty good. I’ve noticed a few things like you will put ‘sigh’ in a sentence in stead of out side of it. Try not to do that. Instead of “sigh. Heheeh” but Sighing, “heheeh” you get it? I don’t know much about grammar so IaM going to guess that’s it’s pretty good. You seem like you know what you’re doing. That’s the only things I really saw otherwise this book is actually pretty good and I want to continue reading it.
The writing quality is good especially the earlier revised chapters. It's easy to understand and describes what's it's intended to well. There are few grammar errors but they are too few to matter lol The updates look stable... as someone who prefers quality over quantity... I think it's good. The story development... the history part was written so well that I was imagining all the scenes perfectly so I think the writer can be proud of it. /me screams IT WAS AWESOME... the rest of the part, including the introduction, portrays the incoming chapters well... there is a flow which I like. The character design is fun since I see no flaw and they all go with the flow... the grim ripper is the most interesting character IMO ;) The world background, history, and the connection of it to the events in the storyline is wow... Suggestions (though not many) 1) I hope you are able to keep up the flow, you better. 2) The start is interesting as it should be... make the arcs on its level... 3) Make the average length (1000 how much ever word you like).... and don't worry about it as long as you cover up an event. Since this just the start and I love it... I am writing only this much... ENJOY!
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Wow, I am simply blown away by the quality of this story. The descriptions are vivid, the action scenes are detailed, and the emotions feel raw and real. I haven't read many post-apocalyptic stories, but this one really exceeded my expectations. Definitely recommend!!
I love this story, specially the writing. The plot is very engaging and I would def recommend this work to my friends. The character is actually quite relatable and the development is well managed. Great job!
Another fantasy to read! Add this to your fantasy reads, it is really one of a kind. You should check this out! HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for all fantasy readers💯♥️
The girl protagonist is the kind of girl I find cool. hahahaha. The story is very interesting and it gets better throughout the book. I suggest reading it.
I really liked your description and synopsis, it's quite good. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.............
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