A person from earth is reincarnated in the Harry Potter World as Draco Malfoy. Armed with future knowledge, he tries to defeat all obstacles while protecting his family, fighting Voldemort and figuring out how to deal with teenage girls.
Already read a story that is almost the same as this but this fanfics grammar is AWFUL honestly I don’t understand how people don’t use other sites to fix their grammar before posting a fanfic but anyways don’t bother reading until the author fixes every single chapter lol
5 years ago
10
Feebling
If I'm not mistaken....this incomplete abandoned story is already on the webnovel. The difference Is however that the other story doesn't have such a ****ty grammar and entirely bull**** sentences.
It's a good translation; although there were a few Grammer and sentence issues (which became somewhat better in later chapters), it was still coherent enough to keep up and understand what's going on in the story.
The story itself is something I craved for, as it had an ideal development, and It's sticking to what happened in the books/movies. The author does not throw In completely unrelated parts, instead incorporating both seemingly essential and insignificant details from the original story to create a stable plot.
It does good credit to the original and does not destroy it like I was afraid it was going to.
I just wanted to say thank you to both the author and translator for your hard work.
I am looking forward to future updates.😁
4 years ago
2
Chizano
Honestly can't understand a damn thing. Horrible grammer, and just goes all over the place in terms of plot. WOULD. NOT. RECOMMEND.
5 years ago
2
jmori2010
This is a very poor MTL of: Harry Potter’s Natural Villain Alt name: 哈利波特之天生反派 SPOILER:Regarding FL and harem tag: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER:...FL is Pansy, and MC is faithful throughout the novel. He has women who pursue him, despite him being in a committed relationship with Pansy... The women are persistent, harem comes into play at the final chapter with an open ending, where readers can decide if MC accepts them, or kicks them away.~
2 years ago
1
Hunter_101
background makes no sense pansy is not a little bich to draco and draco was not an pussy and how come even after reincarnation the is a pussy and malfoys dond have servents they have elfs so how come people know he's dumb even after reincarnation still if he has servants they should have made contacts so the cannot talk bad of them so its utter bullshit so don't read
4 years ago
1
Raider325
It is a good story overall
The grammar has some problems but it's still coherent enough to understand what is happening
It is an interesting idea that I am looking forward to
Already read a story that is almost the same as this but this fanfics grammar is AWFUL honestly I don’t understand how people don’t use other sites to fix their grammar before posting a fanfic but anyways don’t bother reading until the author fixes every single chapter lol
If I'm not mistaken....this incomplete abandoned story is already on the webnovel. The difference Is however that the other story doesn't have such a ****ty grammar and entirely bull**** sentences.
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It's a good translation; although there were a few Grammer and sentence issues (which became somewhat better in later chapters), it was still coherent enough to keep up and understand what's going on in the story. The story itself is something I craved for, as it had an ideal development, and It's sticking to what happened in the books/movies. The author does not throw In completely unrelated parts, instead incorporating both seemingly essential and insignificant details from the original story to create a stable plot. It does good credit to the original and does not destroy it like I was afraid it was going to. I just wanted to say thank you to both the author and translator for your hard work. I am looking forward to future updates.😁
Honestly can't understand a damn thing. Horrible grammer, and just goes all over the place in terms of plot. WOULD. NOT. RECOMMEND.
This is a very poor MTL of: Harry Potter’s Natural Villain Alt name: 哈利波特之天生反派 SPOILER:Regarding FL and harem tag: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER: SPOILER:...FL is Pansy, and MC is faithful throughout the novel. He has women who pursue him, despite him being in a committed relationship with Pansy... The women are persistent, harem comes into play at the final chapter with an open ending, where readers can decide if MC accepts them, or kicks them away.~
background makes no sense pansy is not a little bich to draco and draco was not an pussy and how come even after reincarnation the is a pussy and malfoys dond have servents they have elfs so how come people know he's dumb even after reincarnation still if he has servants they should have made contacts so the cannot talk bad of them so its utter bullshit so don't read
It is a good story overall The grammar has some problems but it's still coherent enough to understand what is happening It is an interesting idea that I am looking forward to
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