The Golden Path Redux

Only 5 chapters in and I could say this story has a lot of foreshadowing events. The lore itself is great as its a combination of a cultivation novel and a sci-fi novel, which I both love. The author also likes to elaborate on explanations which makes the world very real. Totally recommend.

This story is just in its initial phases, but the foreshadowing of an intense battle for the MC and his FL (Maybe FL? xD!) had been set in stone. I find the concept quite interesting. Although I'm not a big fan of Sci-Fi stories, I do read them occasionally (albeit rarely). The merging of technology and cultivation are the highlight of this story and I am looking forward to how it will unfold. More power to the author and I am looking forward to Theodore and Turia's adventure in the world that you made.

Bro your book has high potential. Continue writing it and readers will run onto you hahaha. I like the revenge part, its the part that will ignites the fire in each readers emotion. Bro-san jia yo! Love your novel💕😍

This is very beautiful! I'm not really into sci-fi genre since I couldn't understand anything, but this book is really easy to read and understand. I'm still confused at other parts, but that just my nature since I'm not really reading sci-fi. I hope to see more of Theodore. And I'm still reading it.

The story is perfectly designed and scenarios are easy to imagine and honestly speaking I loved the way it was written. The plot is awesome and got me hooked to read more. Good luck on future chapters author and fighting!!

Good work author! I must admit that I am not that familiar with the genre but I am still hooked. Which is why I think it's good! The 'info dumping' as they termed it actually helped me understand what was happening. I am rooting for Theo and I like that he's humble, eager but determined. I am rooting for them all! Quite intrigued with Duunim too. HAHA. I'll definitely read everytime you update!

This story has good world-building and amazing plot! I would totally recommend it to anyone who likes fiction and cultivation! Thank you author for such an astounding story!

I really love how the author described the world, it was all painted for me. and the MC i found really intriguing. I am looking forward to reading more! Please update soon. Theodore❤

I really like the way you described the ML as well as the background. One can easily imagine and feel this in their mind. The idea of the story is also good so keep going. I recommend others also to read it. A worth reading novel.👍🏻👍🏻⭐

The situation the MC was in at the beginning was really painted for me, and I was able to picture it happen as I read it. His interaction with the mysterious events, consistently seeking for answers, that don't get answered right away helps push the MC in the right direction. I really enjoyed the relationship between the orb and the MC, and hope this back and forth continues throughout the book. It is also nice to see a cultivation novel set in a science fiction story line, as it doesn't always work, but the author was able to make it work, and work well. Added to my library, can't wait to read more.

I'm going to start off with your imagery is really good and you excel in descriptive writing. I can imagine the scenery inside my head. The flow is really good and everything connects very well. I can already see hints of what Theodore's personality is like in first few chapters! Great Job!

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