Nephilim: New Dawn

In all honesty, I wasn't expecting this when I clicked the link. I definitely wasn't expecting this from a new author. You are a great storyteller and use amazing descriptive language. Every word has me wanting more. This one is definitely going in my library, along with any other works you write. The decently sized chapters, engaging story, and great use of skill ensure that readers like what they are reading. Good job. There were some things I found a problem with, but they were minor, only occurred once, and weren't all that distracting. I hope to read more in the future. ~ Wolf out.

It's really good novel for overall. from story, writing and etc is fine to be a novel that can appeal the reader. But, from here on its my personal opinion based, since the other aspect already said is good enough. I think you over used this character "-" here, like it have so many function on your novel. first it can be indicate as conversation, second indicate as though or any action/movement from person when you can use other symbol like "[]" "{}" "()" ";" and other. having a single symbol/mark with so many function like this might confuse the reader or it just me that not familiar with it. There some paragraph that to long, it make me thing that it will be nice if you split it into 2 or 3.