Prince of Heaven and Hell

So, Beast here. I am posting a newer review of this story. The grammar may be wonky, and I am trying to fix it, but I need time. Daily updates, but can't say it for sure. I might miss one or two. Story is too fast-paced, I know it. I am fixing it. A ton of info dumps. I am working on it, to make it more appealing. Ton of World Background packed into a very few chapters. I am rewriting the damned thing again. So, please bear with it.

I enjoyed what I have read so far. The writing is clean and grammatically sound. I would like to see a bit more description in the beginning chapter. I want to feel like I'm standing right there with the MC as he is entering the video game. Overall, good writing and a neat premise. Keep up the good work.

it doesn't make sense, it's a complete mess with no plot and no fixed structure. A waste of time Obs:Chapter:61 ..........................................................

I love the concept, but the grammar I find is just unreadable. I would recommend getting a translator. Wether that means a friends, a payed worker, or even a app like grammarly. It would make the story so much better. Also I love the yandere, there the only reason I keep reading

the author tries to be overly mysterious with his broken grammer which results in rubbish where one cannot make out what the **** is happening. 60 chapters in and we still cannot make out what the **** is this about. dont try to make sense of it ur just wasting ur time

as one of higheset level player in my guild at black desert online. i can seriously freaking related with the man, and i love how detailed this author could made that made me reminds myself to when im firstly create an account in black desert online. haha

it has a high potential if not for the fact that the info or background of anything is isn't too little i can just get the gist of it and the other parts aren't explained well. it's fine if you don't explain too deeply but, like explain when the game started and when he entered the game.

Ugh... I haven't started reading it...but multiple Yandere waifus?! I'm sold ❤️ ...................... ..................... ................... .....

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It's the author supporting his own book. I will be honest to review it. Why you should read this? Our MC is a creator of Oasis, a VRMMORPG. He is reincarnated kinda into Oasis. The story is good and interesting while Glitch is OP but surely fails many times. His failures make him OP. The updates are frequent, 1 chapter per day. Grammar may be a bit rusty, I still lack it. The world-building is great too as Oasis has a sheer amount of places with an intertwined history.

great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up

I love the story. Few errors but it’s all good! I hope you put a book cover so the book will caught many people’s eyes. Highly recommended,!..

It's a pretty interesting story! I haven't read a lot of LITRPGs, but this one has definitely peaked my interest! One thing that was confusing was discerning thought from speech, but only at first. You put the MC mumbling in single quotations, so I was under the impression that speech was in single quotations and was very confused when characters actually did begin to speak. But that is my only complaint! Other than that, well done.

An interesting read! This story made me feel like I was in an actual video game. The naming of the characters are cool and I’m interested in learning more about each of them! Though it’s still early, I recommend this story for isekai’d adventure gameplay lovers!