* Not A chapter *

Hey guys I read your feedback as soon as I had my internet up and running again.

Here is the thing I learned these past few days.

1: Being a smartass and trying to circumnavigate the system is frowned upon. sorry about that!

2: I need to write longer chapters. Friend says its better.

3: Jobs are really hard to find. being a college undergrad is tough, I'm not even a good student.

4: I plan to finish writing the rest of 15k words. i won't post for about 4 days more.

so tnx on for the support and advice... it helps me a lot no matter how harsh the words are.