In world of One Piece

In world of One Piece

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Author: Rabin_Subedi
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A guy who was sent to one piece with special powers.

i have been getting a lot of bad reviews about how the mc is nerfed but just read up to 20 chapters story gets way better.

I do not own one piece and any of the characters except our mc





AN:

It's my first time writing so don't kill me. I post when I want. Also, join my patreon https://www.patreon.com/Myfanfiction





I am posting this on scribble hub and planning to release it on royalroad.

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NewGoldie
NewGoldie

The MC get Nerfed then buffs then Nerfed again, the inconsistent power that MC have is kinda SHitTy. Atless you got one consistent about the MC that's his power and personality "Bland ".

5 years ago
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CxD18
CxD18

Mc gets flying thunder God and lighting logia fruit as powers. And what does author do, directly nerf him. Like ever heard of flying thunder God jutsu with a distance limit of 5 m and only usable once an hour. A logia user spends half an hour dodging a tiger without haki. I mean come on logia user have all attacks pass through them without haki.

4 years ago
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amaturewriter
amaturewriter

MC is neutered as ****..he has flying raijin and lightening DF but author neuters him so much, plus MC is bland, there not personality to him......................... Author, u shouldnt neuter him, I suggest rewrite cause as this is, its bad,

5 years ago
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Imperial_Fox
Imperial_Fox

Author nerfed the **** out of MC, he is supposed to be lightning man with flying thunder God, and still can't travel 1/100 the speed of lightning, even more that author doesn't consider Devil fruit's abilities, he trained for like a year and still only knows how to throw lightning bolts thatt only burns trees, and there was enel, who could literally vaporise island using it without training. Flying thunder God was neutered so much that it is actually better to not use it in battle as it is '''stamina consuming'''. And he doesn't even receives a observation boost of lightning DF like Enel, I feel that enel might be a better DF user than MC.

5 years ago
26
LordofMountains
LordofMountains

trash novel and the author seems he doesn't know anything about physics and one-piece retard mc and in the middle, it will turn into harem to cover his poor writing and creativity as usual

4 years ago
15
Matthew_Morrison
Matthew_Morrison

This is the most boring **** I ever read it is basically wish fulfillment with my killing everyone except Luffy family and crew. Also the writing quality is beyond **** it even surprised me.

4 years ago
6
Frostbaba
Frostbaba

Plot is right up my alley keep it up author kun🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

5 years ago
6
Immortal_Lover
Immortal_Lover

I hope the author study more about the powers of the mc. I'm still at early chapter but the development is very very poor. It makes my IQ so low. I hope it will improve soon. you nerfing him TOO MUCH doesn't make sense at all. I'm okay with the stamina part but the observation haki, ew. Enel literally covered the whole sky island with his haki after he ate the devil fruit. And I believe he didn't even train that much in it at all. The ftg part, I don't know how did you got the idea to add that. If you didn't know the meaning of putting a mark at a specific target, then I just wish you didn't include the ftg at all. That's all. I hope the story gets better as the chapters goes on. And please no more nerfing as it is really a major turn off to majority of the reader. If you are nerfing him, I hope you give us an acceptable reason/s. Have a nice day!

4 years ago
5
Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_Sensei

I'm a drunk I'm a troll troll troll troll troll troll troll tralalala Trololo tralalalala Joe lalalalala troll la la la la la la la la love hahaha hahaha

4 years ago
3
Rabin_Subedi
Rabin_Subedi

Well, I am the author of this Fanfic so I will give it five stars. Please do read my fanfic this is my first time writing so please be lenient on me.

4 years ago
3
Ainzsamaa
Ainzsamaa

Reveal Spoiler

4 years ago
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swordking01
swordking01

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4 years ago
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Min_May_Loe
Min_May_Loe

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4 years ago
2
4bidienkingdom
4bidienkingdom

Great story and great MC character anyway thank you for novel.

4 years ago
2
Majeh7
Majeh7

keep up the great work..............................................................................................................................................................................

4 years ago
2