Fated Adventure.

It's very boring story. No characters development, uninteresting plot, and forgetable protagonist. Mc isn't interesting at all. He got all things needed and thats it. There is some training arc but it not interesting enough to read and you can skip it without missing anything. Don't even mention the heroines. I don't know if author too lazy writing mc and his girl relationship but it's very straight forward like one night stand type of relationships. Basically you meet your heroine and they fall in love with you, dating her, kissing and then s*x. The story itself in my oppinion is unappealing. If you read this hoping for another adventure in multiple world you will be disapointed because there is nothing about adventure here. Story feels very lackluster. aside from the training arc i mentioned before, author tends to describe a non important plot in details but don't care and always skipping important plot point that can make audience pondering. Lastly for author, i hope you can improve your writting skills.

have to balance out the overwhelmingly good reviews witch is weird because the story is not good its just boring i had to force my self to read more after the first few chapters and even than nothing ever happend in the story i honestly hope this review will get deleted because than i know why it has such a good rating

ok this is me personally how i feel about the story it has a good start flame fruit thunder fruit but u lost me after that i legit dont know what happened which is crazy

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it was readable until you brought in cultivation worlds. if anyone wants to read that shit they can choose millions of actual cultivation novels

Yuri.. Ffs! In the end, I'll join the no-harem sect. I'm tired of this sh!t.

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read over a hundred chapter not a big fan of adding cultivation worlds. don't like how you killed off snape yes hes a bit of a dick but i dont think he deserved to die. mc's taste in his harem isn't very good except for Yue and ooc fleur.

Not going to lie at first I wasn't paying attention to the story I thought the idea was interesting MC was fun to read and his intentions with other characters was good. Then we went to the Harry Potter world, and I was like yep I'm going to lose interest about here. Since all the Stories in the past that I have read that have multiverse world crossing when the go to the world of Harry Potter it just be comes lack luster. But was i pleased to find myself still hocked on the story well in to it looking forward to more thank you for your hard work

loving this. hope you bring out more soon👍

The story is good. As it always is. Read it.

Well written story. I like the concept of the peerage system. The personality of the mc is a mix of ruthless to enemies and nice to friends and i like how he doesn’t go out of his way to help everyone. The only problem for me so far is that the harem is getting out of hand in just his (technically) second world. Great story so far can’t wait for more.

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