ok this is me personally how i feel about the story it has a good start flame fruit thunder fruit but u lost me after that i legit dont know what happened which is crazy
6 days ago
12
Ryan_Colman
Have no fear for I am here! You all know me and what I'm about!
8 days ago
10
suihsuih
welcome back [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
6 days ago
3
Crazy_Stamp
loving this. hope you bring out more soon👍
6 days ago
2
UREGO
Not going to lie at first I wasn't paying attention to the story I thought the idea was interesting MC was fun to read and his intentions with other characters was good. Then we went to the Harry Potter world, and I was like yep I'm going to lose interest about here. Since all the Stories in the past that I have read that have multiverse world crossing when the go to the world of Harry Potter it just be comes lack luster. But was i pleased to find myself still hocked on the story well in to it looking forward to more thank you for your hard work
4 hours ago
1
LukeMorningStar
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3 days ago
1
JamesAnthony1999
Not the biggest fan of one piece but it was written well without any knowledge of the series needed for the short arc. Love the Harry Potter books and movies and I am really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to reading more!
4 days ago
1
Dex_Deer
This is op with a system and multiverse travel a definite favorite of mine i wish the author would stack like 20+ chals on a patreon def can have my money no cap
It's a fun read, quite good for the type of story it is.
At its core, the story is self-gratifying wish fulfillment with a side of world travel... But this time, the MC isn't a complete idiot. The MC collects powers from the worlds, but he does appropriately spend time to learn & control them. The story has a flow to it, though the amount of time that passes is sometimes moderately jarring, it's generally easy to catch back up and follow along.
Upon reaching the Harry Potter world, the MC enters a bit more of a strategic mindset; he goes about solving problems, but not by delving in (like a Gryffindor) but by manipulation through strategic dispersal of information. By sending multiple letters simultaneously, he does get around many of the usual pitfalls of corruption - though admittedly certain items do go a bit *too* smoothly for him.
Once again, the MC actually isn't an idiot. For this type of story, that should be a glowing review.
ok this is me personally how i feel about the story it has a good start flame fruit thunder fruit but u lost me after that i legit dont know what happened which is crazy
Have no fear for I am here! You all know me and what I'm about!
welcome back [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
loving this. hope you bring out more soon👍
Not going to lie at first I wasn't paying attention to the story I thought the idea was interesting MC was fun to read and his intentions with other characters was good. Then we went to the Harry Potter world, and I was like yep I'm going to lose interest about here. Since all the Stories in the past that I have read that have multiverse world crossing when the go to the world of Harry Potter it just be comes lack luster. But was i pleased to find myself still hocked on the story well in to it looking forward to more thank you for your hard work
Reveal Spoiler
Not the biggest fan of one piece but it was written well without any knowledge of the series needed for the short arc. Love the Harry Potter books and movies and I am really enjoying the story so far, looking forward to reading more!
This is op with a system and multiverse travel a definite favorite of mine i wish the author would stack like 20+ chals on a patreon def can have my money no cap
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It's a fun read, quite good for the type of story it is. At its core, the story is self-gratifying wish fulfillment with a side of world travel... But this time, the MC isn't a complete idiot. The MC collects powers from the worlds, but he does appropriately spend time to learn & control them. The story has a flow to it, though the amount of time that passes is sometimes moderately jarring, it's generally easy to catch back up and follow along. Upon reaching the Harry Potter world, the MC enters a bit more of a strategic mindset; he goes about solving problems, but not by delving in (like a Gryffindor) but by manipulation through strategic dispersal of information. By sending multiple letters simultaneously, he does get around many of the usual pitfalls of corruption - though admittedly certain items do go a bit *too* smoothly for him. Once again, the MC actually isn't an idiot. For this type of story, that should be a glowing review.