Naruto: Ren the Sealmaster

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no stupid system no stupid hareem nothing like that just an excellent storytelling

if you read the synopsis, then this fanfic is about character assassination like boruto, like Hiruzen suddenly become stupid/smart and change graduation age ninja academy, then i think if you do this kind of thing, how about we make obito suic1de so he can see rin, pein and obito can also revive Yahiko and rin, madara can also destroy 4 ninja village after hashirama died for peace. that's why i hate character assassination..

I stayed up half the night marathon reading from the beginning until now, honestly this fanfic is not perfect but it is realistic and very fun to read, I give it a 5 because I want to continue reading this

The Writing quality is good, what really gets to me is the storytelling, there's a lot of what we call ( over-explaining ), and not enough character interaction and action. Of course, this is just my preference.

I really liked the way the author KasiCair used his logic/reasoning on several points of the fic. I’m on chapter 16 and so far I have not been disappointed. And pls avoid making the portagonist a Gary stu (not that he is).

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Honestly this takes place in the world of Naruto but the MC is simply annoying, he acts like a petulant child,have "innovative" seal ideas that are thrown at us randomly,the apparently interesting thing about Hinata and Ino is kind of forced, the ninjas die easily, he acts like an idiot from our world talking nonsense that only he understands...To be honest this is average or bad at best.

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Why is there no "harem" tag? It would help many people to never open this book. Why is there no "harem" tag? It would help many people to never open this book. Why is there no "harem" tag? It would help many people to never open this book.

Real good, well written and interesting lol. Just glad this author is back cause I had a blast with the other naruto ff

very good, the concept about fuinjutsu have a lot of potential and i trust in this autor to explore that. please dont drop.

The writing is good but it reads like a harem. Being surrounded by girls who all have affection for you isn't story. The setting in which the world and the academy was different could have been interesting if it was focused on. the magic system aka chakra could have been expanded upon. The characters other than females could have been expanded upon. A story I wish was better because the premise outside the harem-like properties was interesting.

Not a Harem yet written like one.Surrounded by girls who like him blah blah, To much explaining in the story that it feels like reading a document.The final thing is it's quite boring and predictable. Please do add a "Harem" Tag because essentially all you're doing is having him surrounded by girls who like him except he's just not doing anything so really your average main character.