I Stream DC on Marvel

When I think about alen walker, this dude comes to my mind

it's actually a great novel idea. my only two points of concern would be 1. the doll plot point. it seems like the kind of thing you'll write and look back on in 2 weeks full of cringe and then drop the novel. Also he interacted with objectively way too many Marvel canon characters in chapter 1. it's a bit much. There were also a million ways you could've introduced debt as a driving force and neccesity without the 'dolls'. I also think you could've done the debt with something other than money, like lifespan etc. because ultimately losing all your money is better than visiting darkseid.

At first it was an interesting story but after a while it became ridiculous... You are trying way too hard to create an comedic atmosphere

It's not very good. the main point is that it gets too ridiculous. it starts off in a very dismally run school, where the strongest rule and the weak try to survive. a young man, who has white hair and good looks. which isn't terrible, but it's wandering into that Chuunbiyo area. he's actually good friends with Gwen Stacey, but with the possibility of something more. fine. He gets a system that allows him to stream whenever he likes, basically like alien tech. And he gets sent to alternate universes, DC, to stream from there. OK, interesting. I suppose the author wanted to give the character a reason, and so he was tricked during a multi day long streaming into buying one hundred very expensive dolls. Rozen Maiden Dolls. so, he's not only mixing comic book worlds with anime worlds, but he's making the MC look stupid. usually the MC seems fine. he's not self-sacrificing. and he can take care of himself, he cooks and cleans just fine. but for some reason he was on a stream where he wouldn't stop until his fans stopped paying him? this is dumb. and then he gets tricked into buying something. dumb. and then apparently the dolls come to life. but only one has appeared so far. it's ridiculous. then when he gets in, he starts to get anime powers from different universes. and we find out he can essentially time travel in different worlds. So not only is he developing relationships with three lovely girls at his high school, also with women outside of his universe. also, the hundred dolls seem like some of them are going to be part of his harem. DC, Marvel, Jujutsu Kaisen, Rozen Maiden, Addams Family, that's the IPs we've got so far. this is turning into another throw everything into the pot, story. where the author is trying to impress people with how many different IPs he knows. and then there are the errors, in spelling, in grammar, etc. If you are a person who has essentially watched or read everything, and don't care about how ridiculous or over the top things get, then go ahead and read this story. otherwise, don't bother.

"I accidentally ordered a hundred fantasy waifu s*x doll.. which have come to life for some reason." I was getting excited, and then this came. Now I haven't read the novel, nor am I planning to, so, to be fair to the author, I'll give it the average rating it currently has.

The idea is good but the MC is insufferable. To sum up the MC would be: a moron, a stalker and a coward without any redeeming qualities.

At first, this was really good. The story started getting boring when the author decided to be a villain with no real progress to the plot for over hundreds of chapters but it was still fine. What made me stop is the drama that was so forced author is berrating his MC for killing a ZOMBIE infected by Marvel Zombies Hunger. Like bro? Did your mother drop you and fell with your head when you are little? It simply does not make any sense.

It was a good start but constant break in scenes after a good build up is the absolute worst thing you could do. It like slowly going 0-90 and then bam! back to 0.

Honestly, read it if you want. The author writes like it is a 2nd pass from a MTL, so decent. Honestly, I just got fed up with the author making the MC an unhinged Idiot. When he got to the point where he decided the best thing he could do was be a villain in DC is the moment the story went to hell.

Español. La historia es interesante pero se pone pesada con los recursos de escritura repetitivos como la comedia centrada en un mc que es patetico y le ocurren desgracias tras desgracias sin crecer columna vertebral, casi parece tipico mc chino, lo que hay que destacar es que esta muy bien escrito y tiene muy buen potencial. Teniendo menos de 20 caps puede evolucionar en algo bueno, solo queda esperar que el modelo del personaje se desarroye fuera de estos tropos para que la lectura sea mas agradable.

this is not a review but a question I will write a proper one once my question has been answered. Is there any yuri in this not a fan of it or any of your books

after reading this story I can conclude that the main character is mentally deficient, the writing is sub-par and I see little improvement throughout 230 chapter. I wish the author the best in their future endeavors

Why is mc so whipped? Bro is op and he is scared of Gwen 😑😑😑😑

The writing needs to much work that I'm surprised it got past the planning phase. The writer uses 1st person pretty often. This is an issue because they're, frankly, rather terrible at it. They constantly get tenses wrong, and break just about all writing conventions that need to be followed for a 1st person text to be successful. The grammar is poor, and the whole paragraph structure is really messy. The premise of the story should of been dropped instantly. Harems aren't popular as it is, so why they threw every poor harem trope into a single story is beyond me. The MC is basically a degenerate that girls seen to thirst for for whatever reason.