Dragon Ball: West City High Schooler, Captures 18!

Shameless review again! This is one of the fic in the pick up event. I enjoy it a lot translating it. It's a little OP, but hell, it's Dragon Ball, everything is OP there, except Yamcha lol. Anyway it's a good fanfic, overall the only waifu is 18, and probably, not completly sure, 21 too. The fic is quite new, thats why I don't know.

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such a wasted apportunity to prank them and say he is from a parallel world where vegeta if female and she married kakarot

Finally a dragon ball fic with Gogeta, Thank you translator kun for finding this and translating this

Great story, definitely keep it up, sadly I can only give one power stone a day unable to level up, the webnovel app causes problems when I install it on my phone and reading using Chrome and Brave doesn't seem to earn exp to increase level. I'll start giving stones to this story daily starting tomorrow.

I don't even know how to begin..... This fanfic didn't just change my life-it recalibrated it. Before I read it I was a husk of a human. I walked the earth like a shadow-soulless, defeated, eating plain oatmeal without even cinnamon. My plants were dying. My Wi-Fi was slow. Birds refused to sing near my house. My dreams were sponsored by disappointment. But then... this literary juggernaut entered my world. From the moment Chapter One unfolded like the ancient scrolls of wisdom it clearly is, I felt my neurons rewire. This fanfic deserves to be carved into stone tablets and launched into space so that alien civilizations can know what it means to thrive. This fanfic deserves to just write a story. You gave us hope. 😍😍

This is a good FF. It has plenty potential. Fast paced? "Yes" but still good non the less. It has to pay attention to more details that will keep the fans entertained. For example that martial arts tournament. That commentator is legendary. If you had acknowledged him I think the fans would've loved it. I'm really looking forward to what else you have in store for us. Hopefully it won't be a flop.

i want to read this one more

Looks good. Wonder how far it'll go, and if you'll keep this quality.

aishi took gohan as a disciple because he thought he was wasting his potential and didn't take goku because he thought he was lazy, in the anime and manga gohan didn't really train at all (maybe he did but not much) he unlocked his super saiya forms by helping (buff) train with goku a martial arts master in the time chamber, then for 7 years he didn't train at all, and the gohan beast part at that time he thought piccolo was dead so boom gohan beast was born (i don't even know where it came from this is a very poorly constructed super saiya state) but goku trained hard, aishi saying goku is lazy is ridiculous and also when talking to vegito, aishi he was really subjective (also when he put on Piccolo's cloak he said it was heavy which is proof he doesn't train)

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I don't even know how to begin..... This fanfic didn't just change my life-it recalibrated it. Before I read it I was a husk of a human. I walked the earth like a shadow-soulless, defeated, eating plain oatmeal without even cinnamon. My plants were dying. My Wi-Fi was slow. Birds refused to sing near my house. My dreams were sponsored by disappointment. But then... this literary juggernaut entered my world. From the moment Chapter One unfolded like the ancient scrolls of wisdom it clearly is, I felt my neurons rewire. This fanfic deserves to be carved into stone tablets and launched into space so that alien civilizations can know what it means to thrive. This fanfic deserves to just write a story. You gave us hope. 😍😍

i might be spamming but heres a five star can you get some slam dunk fan fic??

I might be spamming but.... also if you have free time can you make a Slam Dunk fanfic??? I always see haikyu fanfic and for god sake i dont understand why those sissy like that anime...anyways... pretty please?????