Naruto: Eating A Devil Fruit In The World Of Shinobi

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hold reading at chapter 5, what do you mean by mc eating logia type devil fruit rumble rumble fruit but physical attack can still land on him why bother giving him devil fruit if he cant become intangible?

I think I'm going to be sick. I've read this fanfic before, and I still can't understand how it manages to give me the same disgusting feeling. A 7-year-old at Kage level, with ridiculously huge chakra, trying to link it all to a 1% Senju bloodline—which is beyond impossible. On top of that, he's training with 250 kilograms at age 7, and of course, he explains it with that same 1% Senju bloodline. I guess the MC is secretly an Otsutsuki, because there's no other explanation for this.

Chinese translation, and grammar isn’t that good. Still talks that Chinese way with the expressions. Also 7 year old mc is kage level already so that’s already bad. Also hes apparently engaged to a konoha prince too.

3/3/2/2/2 Things in this FF don't make sense; things happen for no reason, and no reason is explained. In a world that highly values information and whose population is cunning, scheming, and meticulous by nature (because that's what ninjas are like), it's very jarring and pointless. The protagonist is basically a pedophile who grooms a couple of girls to be his wives (although that's the least of it, at least he didn't touch them... yet). I mean literally, when they asked him his dream in class, he said he wanted two wives, how stupid. The story is also full of plot holes and poorly developed plot points, like the fact that at the beginning of the story he was 4 years old, but when he started the academy (about 5 months later), he was 6, or the fact that you can't store living beings in scrolls, but Sizune takes injured fish out of one for him to heal. Oooh, and let's not even talk about the out-of-context deal he made with Itachi (something Itachi would never really do, since he doesn't know MC in the slightest) and that MC apparently becomes Tsunade's disciple, in a bland and stupid way. She looked for him in a place where no one was supposed to know he was, then reveals information about him that she didn't share with anyone and makes him her disciple, and MC's attitude is simply going with the flow. That's one of the stupidest decisions anyone can make, full of mistrust and doubt. They didn't even know each other until that moment. Disappointing. The only good points of this FF are the grammar and some scattered scenes that may be interesting.

Good beginning, interesting cheat and its use. But after Uchicha Massacre the story gets strange in a bad way - things are happening without proper reason. Then, after graduation it's just canon with OP MC who isn't strong enough to defeat Otsutsuki, but stopped increasing his strength. From this moment nothing new is happening.

I think the story is developing in the right way. I don't want the character to be too strong, it would be very boring. From myself, I can only support the author and wish him a successful and finished story.

I'd support myself by giving the Fanfic a 5 star. The fic is just about a guy that dies, transmigrates and grows stronger. You can read it, it's pretty good.

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sheesh, you are such a great translator, but you also find many great works, scouting your profile helped me read some good stories.

Very good novel the translation is much better then the last one i remember reading this 1 year ago here is the name:Naruto: Strongest Logia Devil Fruit In Naruto This translation is much better all that chinese nonsense gone keep up the good work