Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice
Reincarnated and traveling to another world, Eiji Seiya initially thought the world was normal. That was what he thought before he met the heroine and protagonist of the franchise he had watched in his previous life.
Not only that, after he awakened the Inner Voice System to grow strong by complaining about plot, heroine and protagonist in his heart to get many rewards.
He is determined to increase his power so that he can save his home world, the world where he was reincarnated that was hit by the disaster "Honkai" and save beautiful girls like Kiana, Mai, Bronya, Rita and others who had tragic endings in the original works!
"I will save them all!"
However... Everything went smoothly... Eiji earned rewards every time he changed the plot in another franchise.
It's just that... What's wrong with these heroines?
Lala Satalin Deviluke who was supposed to be engaged to the protagonist instead became his fiancée.
Sona Sitri suddenly called him to the student council office and said she wanted to make a deal with him.
Rias Gremory who was supposed to ask the protagonist for help to solve her political marriage problem with Riser Phenex inexplicably came to him.
The girls were disgusted at the protagonists of their respective franchises.
Something was wrong here!
Not only that, heroines like Kotegawa Yui, Sairenji Haruna, Akeno Himejima, Kuroka, Serafall Leviathan, Grayfia Lucifuge, Sakurajima Mai, Ai Hoshino, Kasumigaoka Utaha and others...
They like him!
All the super beautiful and sexy women that many men in the world covet surround him and leave their respective protagonists.
Grayfia even betrayed her husband.
Eiji who saw all this was dumbfounded.
At first he was confused as to why these heroines were surrounding him, but gradually he realized and knew that it was all happening because ...
His inner voice!
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Genre Details: [Not too serious + Harem + Comedy + No yuri + No netorare + MC is manipulative + MC slaps protagonist + Plot focus on heroine + Not waste so many chapters for unimportant characters except 1/2 chapter + Except Protagonist, MC doesn't waste his time so long with other guys + MC has fiance + MC has many girlfriends + MC is not perfect, sometimes moron + MC is sadistic + MC is not herbivorous + MC is ambitious to get pretty girl. Cough, I mean reward from his system and be strong + MC is possessive, there is no way he would let his girl dance with another guy + MC has an organization and beautiful subordinates + MC sometimes takes a break, he stops being manipulative although he will do it again in the next few chapters as it is hard to restrain himself + MC has a fetish of making his girls drink a lot of his milk until their stomachs bulge + Author sometimes has brain problems where his brain circuits decline in a few chapters due to lack of sugar before exploding again after refilling and making readers eagerly await the next chapter + Author updates every day unless he is sick or has problems in his life which is sad]
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Let me summarize. This book leans more towards comedy and harems that are not too serious and not toxic. The MC can make his inner voice heard by the heroines and that unknowingly makes the heroines disgusted with the protagonists of their respective franchises and gradually favor the MC over the protagonists. And tadaa! MC gets a harem, cough. Sure there's action and ecchi here and there and please familiarize yourself with my unique writing style that might make you complain because my English is not so good.
It was good at the start, but mc became worse than the protagonist at the middle of the story. He think he is a mastermind but the truth is mc just a man child grey stu and all the heroine is really stupid AF
It's good but I really hope this doesn't get dropped or anything.
I honestly liked the idea of the story, but there are SO MUCH side character interactions that after 30 chapters I was sick of it. I wanted to give this 5 stars, but there are several things I didn't like even though I enjoyed reading the first half of the fanfic, a conscious system, I really hate them, they're like having a person standing in the middle of the movie screen while commenting out loud about the movie, it's really disgusting and annoying, Besides, the system is a loli, which is even worse, a Loli is literally a little-year-old girl, which is terribly illegal. The previous point bothered me a lot but there were also other things, for example the terribly slow pace and the forced plots, accompanied by the MC breaking the 4th wall to justify that the author is forcing the plot (when he fought the 2 beastmen, it was terribly obvious)I really don't know if it improves later but honestly I don't have the desire or strength to continue reading this. Giving the MC convenient abilities is also forced plot, just wanted to mention it
Oh, joy, another riveting critique from the connoisseur of mindless female leads! Because nothing says romance like falling in love as magically as your fanfics rely on inner voices. It's practically Shakespearean, if Shakespeare wrote about fanfiction. Your second fanfic was the shining star, with a dress-up darling leading the way, and then, you dropped it, Just like your mom dropped you when you were kid. Bravo! Your fanfics are like a thrilling rollercoaster of boredom, except for that one gem. Keep up the lazy work, and maybe, just maybe, consider injecting a dose of originality into your inner voice-infested tales.
It's not a bad fanfic, but it gets tiring how repetitive and predictable it becomes with each passing chapter.
Author, you are repeating the same idea in multiple novels. I believe it would be more effective to focus on one novel at a time until it is finished, before moving on to the next one.
Writing Quality .......... 3 Updating Stability ..... 4 Story Development ...1 Character Design ......1 world background ..... 4 Overall Rate ........... 2.6
Pretty mid asf
I will keep my word. Someone who hates yuri in harem is definitely isn't my enemy. So I don't feel like to be harsh.But ya know. After mindset of mc got changed in chapter 103,im not gonna praise him.Let me explain his shift by a simple dialogs.-Look we have such a great girls around, why don't you seal the deal with them so we can see more of our beloved wifus?- don't have time, we have protagonist to cuck!-fair enough.That's how routine goes before 103 chapters.After?-so why do we waist so much time without doing anything? why don't you go and at least take girls that was already one step before Conquering?- I play hard to get and I don't need more girls, though I still waist time but I wouldn't do anything to them! isn't I am cool?!😐😐😐YES, HE BECAME HYPOCRITICAL HERBIVOUR PROTAGONIST HIMSELF.At least those ntr scenes was fun. but author dislike to write lewds and even that got taken from us.And now that's just a simple comedy novel... Very interesting, thank you....sigh.
I'm sorry to say this but below 0 IQ protagonist is really boring and frustrating yet story was good till some point and after that just boring and main reason everybody reads this one is reactions of heroines and protagonist bashing. MC is dumb enough to not guess anything even though he has knowledge about anime and fantasy troupes anyway I just stated truth of matter not hate the book itself.
Not really my style, but you might like it. I felt like I lost a few brain cells with each chapter I read, but hey, it's popular for a reason, right?
It's good, I like it but it's a little frustrating that 167 chapters have passed and honkai hasn't been mentioned (and if they mentioned it I didn't see it), as I said it's a very good fic, but if you're looking for honkai content, you won't find it here to find out much later because of how the story seems to go
DogLicker. Please don't be slothful. If you keep making the same fanfiction again it would make us less interested with your works. Also update your other fanfictions already.
A good story featuring manipulate MC, downgrade protagonist from original work and become more like a villain. Also it will be a long time until "Classroom of the Elite" get into the story.