To be a Viltrumite (Dc)

So far so good I'm looking forward to how you're going to expand on the invincible and Dc universe. Since now they have multiple races that can challenge them to a fist fight and win

man. 5 chs in and it's awesome. would like longer chapters but I'm just grateful that someone is finally making an original character and not just some 'personality A with a side of heroism'

I love that SOMEONE finally makes a viltrumite hybrid character that's not just half human!, I think it would be cool though if his moms race actually had more abilities but none of them could grow old enough to manifest them and he would be the first. p.s I think some cool abilities would be like he does not have as much blood in him since he does not need oxygen or accelerated healing.

The fanfic is very good, some things are rushed in my opinion, but nothing that ruins the story. I'm looking forward to seeing how the Viltrumites interact with the DC universe. 👍

there are only 3 chapters out so it's too early to say if this is a good fanfic or not, but it definitely gives me confidence for the future

you now who else like this pice of art and want more my mom

Very good so far, keep up the good work.

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Ive enjoyed the story and when questions are asked we get legit answers i will be reading for the forseeable future

goated story I love the relationship between him and the yk The female lead I do hope that it stays like that

Till now this shit is good, please continue like that

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I really love the concept of how the story started and the way it’s going, I can’t wait to see what you do next for it.

Great novel so far the length of the chapters is very good and story is progressing well so far, the grammar is also very nice. I just have one question from the author who is the love interest?