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I have no idea why people are rating it 5 star there are so many insistency and use of plot device just to push the story forward is already bad. Take his squad form up for example two bloodline line limit user one of which is a female member of almost extinct and wanting clan in the shinobi world, that's basically screaming CRA(Clan Restoration Act, this is canon) any village would jump at the chance especially with bloodline she had as it would be useful in suppressing and would be useful in control of Tailed beasts. In his first mission he is the one doing the action but then next suddenly all his info and his squad info is easily mind read ON ACTIVE BATTLEFIELD by a YAMANAKA, the era in kirigakure is the era of blood mist(in this story) meaning that information SHOULD NOT HAVE THAT EASY TO GET why do you think the enemy ninja(kiri's) buy the info and not just capture and mind walf or torture them especially Konoha (this is canon). All in all its below average, If it is a translation then it is good but is not then you have to do better. Not worth the time.😶

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translation is wild. if you have to brain melt read it (you will get brain cancer in 10 chapters)

This is a really interesting and entertaining story. I can't wait to see how it will develop.

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Really good fic. Would definitely recommend ;)

I think the story isnt that good. Personally there are too many chinese element that just ruin the inmersion. Everybody behaves as if they are in some chinese cultivation novel... its just weird and unsettling. Overall 2.2 stars, with the Writing Quality and Update Stability being good enough to push the score above 2 stars.

This is my assessment when reading up to ch 30. 1. I quite like the story, but there is one thing that confuses me: why was Dui only rewarded with 100 thousand for his life?

Jin TL thanks for the this novel... Even if in some places their are some mistakes wear Yoru are called Night, fast checking myself Yoru translation from JP, I get it... About fanfiction, it is good, MC just bulldoze some of Konoha's main character, and I liked that type of chaos were you don't know who will die next...

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RAW NAME!!! PLEASE!!!! If there is. Other wise, nvm.. Also, a decent read to pass time.

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