I've Already Become An Admiral And Now The System Shows Up?
Author: Astralicity
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[You join Marine School, but are laughed at by your classmates because of your slow training and poor grades.]
[Become famous in Marine School and get rewarded with upgraded traits!]
"Join Marine School?"
Kenji, who had just become a Marine admiral, became speechless when he saw the system text flashing in his field of vision.
"This broken system has been loading for fifty years!"
When he completed the system tasks, he found that Haki, physique, swordsmanship...all abilities could get stronger and even trigger evolution.
[Observation Haki (Gold) has triggered derivative evolution... New trait generated! Future Vision!]
[Physique (Gold) has triggered derivative evolution... New trait generated! Superspeed Regeneration!]
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So, the MC is an old guy, 66 years old to be exact. The mission system thinks he is in his teens and gives corresponding missions like student rankings, capture pirate of 1, 10 million berries bounty, which is a piece of cake for mc. Regarding his personality, he's a lazy old man, not a hot blooded youth. He has a charitable heart. Raw: 海贼：成为大将后，系统才觉醒 Author: 落日余焱
Yeah this is translated Chinese slop for sure, also what was the point of making him old if he's just gonna become young again? It's the same as stories where people are reborn as a monster and then gain a human form, pointless.
It is good up till ch 14 .
Your typical CN Fic, MC became an admiral yet everyone are still gossiping that he's too weak. Even the regular marines! So ridiculous. So ofc MC proves them wrong. Everyone:
Quite good. I like how he is going with the system to gain youth once more, and he went to humour system once he knew he could regain youth throughout system. Human can indeed leave everything behind but not the hope of eternal life.
Laughed, pretty good
It is good
It deserve better rating. Good story so far. I give 5 star for you author. Keep going and complete the story until the end..................
It is chilled story. If you guys look for relaxed and chilled life in fanfiction, it good for you. I enjoy the story myself. I would say it is recommended for spending the time
is this a translation? if is can give me that raw.....?
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This One Piece fanfiction is a hilarious take on the original story, filled with clever twists and sharp humor. The character dynamics shine, and the plot has real potential to grow into something epic. A must-read for fans looking for a fun, refreshing spin on the Straw Hats' adventures!
uma historia simples, tinha potencial mas não foi explorado, o modo de recompensa do sistema prejudica muito a historia, e a escrita é simples, aquela leitura leve que acaba em um dia capítulos pequenos, muito personagens mas pouco real envolvimento
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